this made me cry! I love momiji... *sniffle*

Oh! Poor Momiji! That was so sad! I'm not happy because you're not happy, Momiji! ;_; But it was very beautifully written. Very very good!

KimMi: :sobs: It's just so... beautiful :sniffles sob:
Just so wonderful :waves hand: I love it so much. :Whimper: So Beautiful. :Walks away sobbing:

Elkion: :blinks: It can cry? Damn. Now I've seen everything. This has to be good.

How sad, sweet, and perfect! I'm seriously crying right now, and if mom came in she'd be worried. Not sobbing, but yeah, my eyes are wet. That last line really hit home: "Everyone is happy. Everyone but me." How sad! But it's perfect for Momiji's situation. I read a similar fic on furuba.com called Smile. Go read it, it made me nearly sob all out. Great fic! (Man, I didn't even cry that bad when I watched "A Walk to Remember"...)

How tragic! *tears well up in eyes* I always cry while watching that episode, but you've made it even more realistic! It's so good! The insight was spectacular! Great job! I loved it!

really good! i like it! are you going to make a second chapter? you should its really good!

Wow! Very well written, and very, very sad. I like your writing style. You should continue.