like it, but I think the dialogue needs contractions

LOL So cute.
I think the idea of Sara listing out all these weather conditions that she would like to see, just once, is really funny. I can sympathize with that too, I think. ^_^
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great story, but i think that the language you used for the characters voices is too formal. you need some 'don't's and some 'can't's instead of do not and cannot. dont take this to heart, just some creative critisism

Annie, you obviously haven't read, or have chosen to ignore, the CSI novel "Cold Burn", by Max Allan Collins. In it, Sara and Grissom go to a conference at Mumford Mountain Resort, and they both get stuck there in a snowstorm. Lots of nice Gil/Sara moments in it. And they find a body in the snow, not to mention get a few pointers from a Canadian CSI.
But otherwise, for a Grissom/Sara fic, this isn't bad. :)

Really nice!

Well, being a native New Englander and thinking that for me snow is pretty much overrated it was nice to see things from Sara's perspective. Very in character. I like how the geeks can just have a nice conversation for once ... and that Grissom didn't blow his opening. Sweet story. I hope they get to take that vacation together someday! :-)

** wicked.. both you and this story. pardon my french, but it's true ;-)

Having been through numerous hurricanes, let me tell ya, Sara ain't missing a thing! We're still clearing out from the last one! :-)
Great story. Love the way you have Sara and Grissom interact.

Very interesting story. The dialogue seemed a bit formal in places, but other than that, it was perfect.

I really enjoy your stories - your characterizations of the CSIs tend to be just right and you have great, well-thought-out ideas. The one change I would suggest in your writing is in the dialogue: specifically, that real people use contractions when they speak. For example, at one point you have Sara saying "Were you not..." when she's far more likely to have said "Weren't you..." Even our very staid Gil Grissom doesn't speak so formally _all_ the time.
Please, though, this G/S'er wants you to keep the wonderful stories coming. Thanks for your work!

Aw, I didn't think I could see something as awesome as my snowcovered back yard (with a HUGE snowman from the neighbor kids), but this fic has done it. How adorable! *holds out her bowl* Please, Ma'am, can I have some more?

awsome. so cute.

oh..griss and sara in new england!! think of the possibilities!! can't wait for more!