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| LittleLinor 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuse... hell this was good. Honestly. (and HAH a pairing fic that doesn't end in either complete angst or totaly fluffyness) |
| Isaac's Girl 2004-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gawd, WHAT DID YOU DO TO ISAAC!?!? But other then that the fic was good. Just don't do that to Isaac ever again...please? If you must, call him by his Japanese name, Robin. Beware of Dijnn, from Isaac's Girl |
| Hoshii-Sama 2003-12-12 ch 1, | abuseAh, sweet Shounen-ai... This is a very good fan fic. ^^ I guess wirting what you're thinking really DOES work. Keep up the good work. ^^ |
| Akiko 2003-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it. |
| bladegryphon 2003-12-07 ch 1, | abuseLoved the insight on Isaac's thoughts -- great story! |
| PyscoticLoverKitty 2003-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... That was so sad.. I alomst cried. donm't really care for the pairing, but ... but... That beautiful. Just beautiful. It sounded like one of Cooking Spray's stories. The fire and sword all mean something... |
| Vyctori 2003-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, great fic! I don't see why you think this isn't original--I thought you did a wonderful job. --*-- The anonymous setting of the inn was good--it allowed us, the readers, to focus in more on Isaac's emotion. You did a lovely job with his feelings, by the way. Everything you wrote about--his frustration, anger at himself for becoming a warrior, insecurity about being "the leader" --all of it, I can easily see happening with Isaac. --*-- I also like the way you only gradually worked the names into things. The way you started the fic, it could've been anyone. And except for the fact that you mentioned the pairing at the beginning of the fic (^_^), I wouldn't have known who the central character was. --*-- Isaac's philosophical ponderings were interesting to read...make you think, doesn't it? Also, you had everyone well in character, which often is a challenge. --*-- And a happy ending! ^_^ I was beginning to worry that you were going to leave Isaac in the throes of unrequited love. I always like it when things work out! --*-- Anyway, once again, excellent one-shot! I hope to see more from you soon! ^_^ |