if i give this to you,

will you promise to forget

for my sake?

and since you have it now

you shouldn't remember

because

it would haunt you

as long as you still kept the promise

and when you did remember,

you would freeze, go numb, go blank,

and i can't paint you

if there's nothing

on your face

I love the thought of that three-way spar.

:) Very sweet.

That's sweet.

That was so sweet. w

Yep I love Yuri. Yuri is so much more better than Yaoi in my opinion. To Raiden, it's short because it's a drabble. Anyway nice story. I enjoyed how you handle Ino's feelings.

OMG yuri and especially inosaku is teh love!

beautiful one-shot,I loved story is the

reason I like InoXSakura.

Nice story, I really liked the signifigance that the ribbon had. Like how that ribbon had saved her from death, and how the ribbon is good for tricking people into thinking that she was reaching for a weapon.

And I also liked the fact that you didn't go out right and say who the ribbon had belonged to. That was a nice idea, aswell, but for people who don't know of Sakura and Ino's backstory it might be a little confusing...

Your story is really inventive. I like the details. Please write more.

Aw. . . InoSaku fluffyness! Yay! _

The ribbon wore by Sakura... I love it when people take what they learn from snippets of cannon and expands on it.

Whoa...As always, a beautiful piece, Sunfreak! I realized the second time I read this and thought about it that there was symbolism involved. There was a lot, wasn't there? Like taking the blows of the poisoned needles to save her, and the fact that this one is the one that she will always have...
Keep doing these little one-shots-they're beautiful, touching, and definitely some of the best things to be found here.

oh! Ino's precious ribbon! add more detail on her Ribbon and when i linked the journey between this and that made me adore the author so much!

This is a great story. I could actually see Ino doing something like that. It’s a sweet story that lets you see another side of her.
I like how even though you say ‘love’ in the story, it can be seen as friendship love too. But I prefer the yuri indication. ;; I’ll admitted, I like rare couplings.
The shortness is good. Sometimes people make the mistake of thinking that a story needs to be long and pad it. It can take away a lot from the story by having descriptions that distract rather then add.
Sweet, original, well written, and I couldn’t spot any spelling mistakes. I look forward to your future writings!
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(And now to spend the rest of the night looking through the past ones. ;;)
And a note to the flamer: How can you be sure that writer person is from America and not France? *gasp!* You’re not a stalker are you? *backs away*