Love this it was really good. We ended up going to my moms work so I got a few more chapters in.

Love your story I love the way it is playing out. Hope I can continue reading it soon it is amazing but my mom is picking me up and her computer is broken. Tear.

i absolutely loved it!! yay i am SO happy!

Good God I Thought She Died. Whew. That Was A Wonderful Story I Loved It. The Ending Is perfect.

Hahaha I love it keep it up! =)

good Story!

I so adore this story, why don't you update ?

heya, this is a great story, cya later.

I kinda only managed to read until Chapter 5, so everything I say goes to these chapters. I really liked how the story started out, but I think you could have made more out of it from the begining on. Sure, they are fighting at first, but... to me it's just not enough fighting. And I think you cut out too much. I would have loved to read how they dress in the morning or how they are spending their free time between classes more. I think their feelings develope a little fast and I am sometimes missing... logic. Why doesn't one of the teachers not just apparate to america and buy the key? Or floo there? I know why the muggle studies teacher doesn't (I didn't read the other chapters, but skimmed them at least) but what about McGonagall and Snape? Why would they let Hermione and Draco spend MONTHS cuffed together?
And how does Harry master Legilimency and Occlumency all of a sudden?
This stuff is just missing, so... I am not going to read on. I don't think you care, because you couldn't finish the story on your own anyway, but... I comment on the stories, I read, so I wanted to say this stuff anway.

Talvi

i love.


you lost it a little in the last couple of chapters, but i still LOVE IT.

really nice...and i like your others oneshots and ** as well =) very nice

This was a really fantastic story- the plot, characterization and quirky quotes were marvalous. However, I do suggest that if you have time, you have someone beta it or you can proofread it yourself. Because in later chapters, there are typos and slightly missing words. Great Job!

This whole story was awesome. I liked how the sword could very well have been a story line in the book. It was so real. Ver very good. And, sigh, I wish I were in Hermione's place...darn.

Anyway, excellent job!

Awesome!

LoVeD iT

Confuzzled239

i think this is absolutely great! magnificent story...
i was just wondering though- how would they go to the toilet?!
LOL

that was great. SO great. LOL i LOVED the ending! awesome job!!