 Albatross1029 2009-07-07 . chapter 12An excellent story! Please update soon, I'm anxious for more. An interesting spin on Snape's position. I really like your writing style. |
 ArchArtist/Writer 2009-01-22 . chapter 12I'm so relieved that you're still updating this: it's annoying when real life gets in the way of fanfic! It's very tenderly written, very compassionate, and I like the way you've subtly depicted the characters.
Having re-read the whole fic, it takes me right back to the days of Staffroom Seduction... |
 Silverthreads 2008-08-14 . chapter 12Great update! |
 excessivelyperky 2008-08-13 . chapter 12Excellent chapter! Here's hoping things work out better than they did before. |
 kari2500 2008-08-12 . chapter 12Ellos again. I am once more amazed at your exceptional writing skill and suspect a great love of books behind it. I immensely enjoyed every word of this chapter. And find each character's inner monologue to be intriguing if not hilarious at times. I do hope you continue writing and update soon. Kudos on an excellent chapter. ^-^
Ja ne~
~ Kari ~ |
 Iva1201 2008-08-11 . chapter 11I find out that good authors sometimes don't get nearly enough reviews - so let me remedy for it by a story I enjoy so much.
(-: I was very happy to see this update (I hadn't hoped anymore, you see) - especially in the view of its excellency. What a splendid idea to use the prophecy scene here! And well, I can only say that I love your Dumbledore (as the opposite to JKR's book 7 canon one). Hope to see also Madam Pomfrey again soon.
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 Iva1201 2008-08-11 . chapter 12Excellent. (-: I really enjoyed this update - as the last one after all. I particularly loved your view of Lucius, whom neither I see as a fully bad person - read, he can still care for his friends unlike Voldemort. And what to say to the topic Dumbledore-Snape, Dumbledore-McGonagall? Simply suiting and very much welcomed development here. The only thing I wanted to ask is if Caradoc Dearborn wouldn't be already much older - I am killing him off in the new chapter of my own fic (not that I would ever want to dispose of anyone, mind you, but it's necessary for the story) and do that because he is mentioned as Order Member. But well, he still could have become one even very young, right? Keep writing, I shall keep reading. (-: |
 excessivelyperky 2008-06-29 . chapter 11Heh. Self-assured, isn't he? Ah well, nice to see him not in the depths of despair for once. |
 Linoria 2008-06-22 . chapter 11wow, never heard of this concept before. I'm loving it! can't wait for the next update! |
 Silverthreads 2008-06-14 . chapter 11Wonderfully dramatic, this chapter stands well built on the others before it. |
 wynnleaf 2008-06-14 . chapter 11Great to see this updated! Wow, so you're going with the idea that Dumbledore sent out the first part of the prophecy intentionally. I hope you give us some more of Dumbledore's rationale as time goes on. |
 NoxSomnium 2008-06-14 . chapter 11Please excuse me while I perform the traditional Update Dance. I really really love this story. The idea of Snape with Schizophrenia is rather fascinating. His behavior will change radically though now that he's on his meds. I eagerly await seeing how he deals with these people who expect his previously strange behavior. |
 Athena Keating-Thomas 2008-03-31 . chapter 10Yes, this was a fantastically written fic depicting the effects of Schizophrenia in a very telling way, while keeping well within canon as we knew it back then. Well done! |
 Athena Keating-Thomas 2008-03-31 . chapter 9Oh, wow. It's taken me until now to catch up with your fic again and these latest chapters are amazing. Showing how the hallucinations affected Snape when he was with the Malfoys was especially painful, and the use of the Pensieve by Dumbledore was inspired.
Just wow. |
 kari2500 2008-02-09 . chapter 10Truly a brilliant well written story. I loved the Hamlet quotes in the beginning of each chapter. The plot was more than a little intriguing. I had never thought of severus as a Schizophrenic before. It amazes me how well the mental illness fits Severus so well. Kudos to you for writing such a magnificent story. I just wish there were more to read.
Ja ne~
~ Kari ~ |