Great! I'm am very confused right now, but I hope things will clear up later on. Does the Kayli in this story have anything to do with the Kayli in EH&MSOH and HP&TME? I love it! Up date son!

Once again, you have succeded in maing me sad, but I still liked it - well done dear. Only point is that you should warn people before putting even a hint of slash in it - I'm not offended but some people might be. Thanks again, abbi x

CONTINUE IT!

I dont want to offend you but this needs some work, and you may think that I should not be one to speak because I have not written one story myself but that is my opinion. Thanks

El stinko!

o, good story. i like the voice you used for it. i got a little confused in some parts, but i sorted it out. bravo.