Wow. That was just amazing. You have a wonderful style of writing, and the story was...wow. I'm at a loss for words here lol. Reading this makes you really feel bad for Muraki and Nagare. It gives an interesting insight into why Muraki is the way he is too. Amazing story, I really enjoyed it. You are a great writer.

Well written story. Loved how you brought all the characters together. Thanks for sharing your story.

Wow... this is so amazing! I never thought that I'd pitty Muraki.

LOVE IT!! good job!!

Somehow I missed this fics when it was published and I just catched it now that I'm looking for an old story.. I can't believe how good it is!! Never though of Muraki as a parent ever before, but it is very interesting, and Oriya is amazing, I love him!!
Your Muraki is touching, his pain so real, and just a little flash of madness... oh my...
And I have a weird atraction for Nagare. So this is like... fanfic dream come true!! Really, loved your narration, and the concept, really cool, wouldn't have think about it before. Congrats!!

This was beautiful. You've truly captured the grief of both fathers. I especially like how you wrote Nagare's reactions to Hisoka's unwillingness to be near him. The endings for both parties were very touching.

OMG i love it. absolutely LOVE it. so angsty. so right. you haf all my fav. characters in it. its so rare, diz kind of fics. it gives another perspective into yami. and its so heartbreakingly sweet. i juz love diz fic. to think dat Ukyou and Muraki had a child n Ukyou had a miscarriage. its brilliant!

Superb! You really outdid yourself with this fic. Great job!

That was very...interesting. I do love the evocative use of culture and this story is original, because I think few others cover Hisoka's past, especially with Nagare involved. I hope you continue this, since you seem to say that Ukyou's lost child is the key to his madness. I'd like to see what happens when Sensei and Hisoka meet later. And more Oriya. Oriya is my favorite character of all. A really impressive story.

That was so beautiful, in a sad/eerie way! It made me want to huggle poor Muraki! ^^* *does it anyway, because Muraki is so slurpable* You really write M and Oriya so well! :)

Excellent story. I love your flow of words and it was quite interesting.

And I'm reading this instead of writing an essay...fun. Anyway, great fic, really. It's so...nice? What's the word I'm looking for? It's very...oh forget it. I absolutely adore the image of the nine-year-old Hisoka ^__^ Really, an incredible fic.