Uhh ... she is kind of Mary Sueish ... I leave off here, unless you ca explain som things. That's one of the troubles with crossovers.

Lol - It would have helped if you had said that about your fanfic, what you said in your author's note earleir. Don't mind me finding cannon errors as I'm enjoying it.

Jabberwocky, funny.

Suggestion, Stich never heard Mimsy say. 'I say'. He sounds to British. Remeber ... he lives on Hawwaii, an American state. He isn't likely to say that. But the rest, he would be corect in mimicking her.

Well, there are some problems.

1. Firepole in Redwall? No ... I think you need to use diffrent wordage there, like just pole.

2. East? - Is there a river that flows North to South in Redwall. Personally, I can't remeber.

3. Cocoa trees - Well, since the folliage is based from what is in Britian, I doubt that there are any there. But that they are rare helps. But ... how long and what process is used to make choclate from the cocoa beans? I'ld research that.

4. Wolfbane - Do Redwallers name their swords? They ussually don't.

5. It was given to her by Lady Cregga Rose Eyes. This would have to be before Long Patrol when she lost her eye sight, right? Why would a squirrel need to save Salamandastron from a big hord? There is a strong badger, hares and stong fortress to contend with. This makes her seem Mary Sueish due to her great achievment.

6. Razorteeth - Problem with the name is, Razor is an item usedtoday. I don't think it would have been used back then. You need a better name.

7. Humans as legends ... uhh ... no. Breaks Redwall cannon. Sorry. A big thing in Redwall cannon.

8.chocolate-fudge-damson-plum-candied-chestnut-with-meadowcream ... are there really any such foods in Redwall ... yes, but they aren't common place. But ... it does go with the humor bit.

Well, the first chapter is good. My only suggestions.

One is to use story format to say that they are doing the science project instead of saying our story begins.

Second, describe Stitch. For any Redwall fan who doesn't know what he looks like, they'll get a kick out of it, believe me, because it adds to the humor.

Third, would Stithc have called it by what it really was going to do when he had no clue? Or would he just say thingy-ma-jig or something simular as he ussually says to Lilo when he says stuff.

This certainly is a good story. Can you make more chapters?
What's with Stitch and the sword? Honestly, I give this story a thumbs up.

Love the story. I hope you get back into it soon. I want to se how it ends.

Dear Yuoofox

A damson is an oval-shaped pear-like fruit to answer your question.Nice story,by the way!I like Lilo & Stich AND Redwall, so your story called "Lilo & Stich Visit Redwall" is the perfect combo! :-)

This is so cute! It has much potental. I love the non-traditional redwall stories.

This a funny story, keep up the good work. I thought it was halarious. I cna't wait for chapter ten, if you are going to finish it.

... AWESOME! Just one question: Is Matthias in this?

Who's Triss? I don't think that I've read that book. I liked your story, even though I haven't seen Lilo and Stich. I will read more later!

That's awesome, putting Lilo and Stitch in Redwall. I've updated, check it out when you get a chance!

Really interesting. And I like that disorder. That is a cool sounding disorder. Well, really great story and thanks for the review!

Hey, I haven't read your story in a while. It's really good. I like it a lot.

XD Pleakley's so girly...it's funny...
Nyeh, Jumba's okay, but Pleakley, Lilo and Nani are the best!