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Reviews For: Shimmer

demonspawn666 2005-03-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful!! Strange though, I wasn't sure how it would end. But I really did like it. It was short, but it said a lot!
Cat H 2004-03-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseI am a H+R fan first and foremost, but if I were to choose an alternate pairing, I would definitely have Quatre end up with her because I could see their relationship working out. Granted, in this story Relena doesn't end up with my favorite Perfect Soldier, but it is still a treat to find a story wherein Pilot 01 and 04 have a relationship with Relena, especially since I don't find much of the latter pairing. The way the story ended is good enough since it doesn't necessarily mean the end of everything but more of a chance for not just one of them to find happiness and don't we want that for Heero too?
Aliquis 2004-02-24 ch 1,	abuseYou know, simply put, sometimes stories WE intend to write write themselves... and that was one bloody good story. I really liked your interpretation of Heero and Relena's feelings. Clear angst, and I also appreciated the serious feel to their emotions. I imagine it wouldn't ever work with them...though we can always hope. Keep writing. You are wonderful. -Aliquis
Of Memories Past 2004-01-16 ch 1,	abuseThis story had incredible insight. Even though I am a die-hard Heero x Relena fan, this was a wonderful story that incorporated many good points. It made me sad, and I just wanted to cry for Heero. But anyone who loves that crazy character would. Excellent job with this. You never disappoint. ~Wren
LadyDi 2003-12-13 ch 1,	abuseActually I like the story just as it is. I got a review from someone about writing a H/R story who said they were so different they really didn't belong together. True I guess. ^^; Another brilliant work as always. :)
Crystaltear 2003-12-12 ch 1,	abusewow...how very bittersweet. As much as I love 1xR together, I also love stories like this where things just don't end up like that...the flip side of reality, that it may not work it, is painfully beautiful in itself. When I started reading this, I knew halfway through that you couldn't have any other kind of ending than you had--I'm glad that you made him say goodbye rather than try to pull them together again. This works for this story. Now, I don't know if you planned on continuing this or not, but I kind of like it where it is--"goodbye" is the most powerful ending there is ^_^ Beautiful, Lara! I'm glad to see you still working on GW, even though I love your IY just as much.
kmf 2003-12-12 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting story. I dont think the ending was particularly unhappy; both Heero and Relena had moved on and seemed to be content with their choices. And it was very nice to see that they could be friends once more, now the hurt was put behind them. I liked this as a one shot, but of course I wouldnt object if it was expanded into a chaptered story - it certainly has the potential! Excellent writing as always! And especially nice to see your return to Rx1 fanfiction
WolfCry17 2003-12-08 ch 1,	abuseHello, I really liked your story, although, it made me wipe a few tears away when Heero just let Relena go. I truely think they belong, not Relena and Quatre. I love you style of writing by the way, but I really hope you continue with this fic and somehow end it happily with Heero and Relena together...this story has the potential for scandals and an affair between the two...I think it could really develop into a fantastic and drama-filling story. But, it is entirely up to you. Thanks for sharing your story:P
Mama-sama 2003-12-08 ch 1,	abusethat was very good and i'm glad to see you writing GW again! You do such a fine job!! can't wait for more of your GW stories!! ^^

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