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| The Procrastinator 2004-08-25 ch 1, | abuse"It is touching, even more so as I realize I this is the first time I have heard him mention searching for Naraku without pointing out the jewel shards as well." It is small details like this that makes this story a diamond in a sea of fools gold. |
| Kiritsune 2004-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAhh, how do you portray the true characters of Sango and Miroku so well? The raw unselfishness of Miroku, allows your readers to truly listen to his thoughts rather than just banish this fic. there is no need for action, because thinking about everything he says is enough to handle...and the romance flows through every thought, making your title totally perfect too...please continue writing...your style and voice is very clear and cute...^-^ |
| ChibiSerenity3 2004-06-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! |
| Dea Mariella 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseomg. i just read the three in this series...they are kawaii! i almost started crying...they are very powerful...i think that you captured sango and miroku's emotions very well. mucho congradulations! |
| Nabob 2004-03-14 ch 1, | abusewow, just wow. this is so awsome, your writing style is excellent and your portrayal of their feelings is just perfect and the moments they share are very touching. Great job, keep going with it, i luv it! hope to read the next installment soon! |
| Laura-Grace 2004-01-20 ch 1, | abuse*wailing, even though she's sitting in the middle of her school's crowded computer lab* OMG! I would've reviewed the first two, but I could bring myself to pause, even for two seconds, to tell you how great an authoress you are! |
| benika 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Angst/WAFF is my favorite. :D Good job with all the characters, and the writing is very good. Look forward to reading more |
| JeSsI 2003-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is one of the most heartfelt stories that i have read in a while. I love the way it is written and the way it has played out. I cant wait for the next part to it!! |
| Sachie Yoritomo 2003-12-21 ch 1, | abuseawesome... i wish i could write like that! my iy fic will be readable tomorrow {i'm publishing it in a minute}, so do check it out! *huzez* ciao ~Sachie |
| Nikki 2003-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are an excellent writer. Your first chapter was very good. I like how Inuyasha took it- still with hope, and telling him to get up and fight. Very nice. |
| LadyDi 2003-12-13 ch 1, | abuse::sniffs:: WHA! ;_; So sad, yet again so well done. ^^ Gonbatte with packing...I've moved four times in my life and the hardest thing is actually getting everything moved - unless you have or know someone with an extended cab truck. ;) Speaking from experience of hauling very heavy boxes, it's best to give away or get rid of the things you know you haven't used in years or probably won't ever use. You'll save yourself a hernia. lol ^^; |
| Spectrum 2003-12-12 ch 1, | abuseYou'd damn well better give it a happy ending. =P I think I've fallen in love with this story, so I think a tragic ending would break my heart as much as it would Sango's. I love how you've captured their relationship, plain and simple. Everything about it is right, from the introspective stuff--I love your insights into their feelings for each other and just why they love each other--to the dialogue--perfect, to the extent that I can actually hear them saying it in my head--to the their actions--everyone's reactions to learning about Miroku's fate are spot-on, especially Miroku's own. And wow... that was one heck of a moving scene toward the end. I got a little teary-eyed myself. - I think this one is going to have to go on my favorites. I love the other two as well, but I don't know... there's just something about this one that was especially touching. Maybe it's because this one touches on an especially serious note--Miroku's kazaana being torn, and his having little more than a month now to live. Maybe it's because I love Miroku's POV so much (and this would be an understatement). Maybe it's because this one includes that scene with the other characters at the very end, which was great because for just a moment we got to see how Miroku relates to the rest of them as well. Or maybe it's just because it’s kind of a middle chapter, picking up from the previous one and leaves us hanging on the next, and I kind of like that. Whatever the case, I've got to save this one. ^_^ - One last thing--I never realized until now just how perfect the lyrics to "Sweetest Thing" fit Miroku and Sango. o_O Wow... that's almost scary. |
| Akarui KH 2003-12-10 ch 1, | abuse=sniffle= Wow...I loved it! That was an excellent fic. Angsty, sad...but not overly so. I myslef have an odd problem with making things a little over-angsty. This is one of my favorite stories, and I would say that this is the best installment. I can't wait for the next one! |
| DC 2003-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseLara you are above being able to disappoint me. Every installment of this fic you've managed to stir emotions within me by syntax and vocabulary alone. The angst demon is pretty cool, give him my regards, the sadness and desperation etched into your words are impossibly accurate. To me describing an emotion is like describing a color its sort of beyond words it needs to be seen but somehow you've overcome my view because you've hit the nail right on the head. You're truly an amazing writer. Good luck with your move and I hope to hear from you early in the new year. As always its been a pleasure, Happy Holidays. ~DC Hey let me know how that whole packing fairy thing goes it would be interesting to hear about. |
| HMPrune 2003-12-08 ch 1, | abuseWow! I can hardly wait for the next installment... |