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libsrevenge
2008-02-09
ch 4,
abuseHooked all teh way through, love how you portray Sephi. :-)
Uncherished Light
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuse-glomps- I love this story! I started reading it on DA, but when i read it here I rejoiced! I love and its the main system I use. (I have no clue how to publish stories on DA, and I mainly write, not draw. Though if you could explain to me how I'd be exstremely grateful?!?!) And anyway, this is one of the best fics I have ever read on either site and I'm so happy to be reading it! (My dad keeps yelling at me to get off the computer, because I've been spending so much time on here reading XP) But anyways, I'm not sure if you finished yet because I haven't finished reading through your already posted chapters, but if your not, please continue! This is great work?!?
Dana-Lith
2007-07-10
ch 13,
abuseYAY i found it!! lol i read the rest on your D.A. profile...IT'S SO GOOD! I command you, as almighty ruler of the fish-swiggles, to update! (o.O beware teh sugar-high)
Felosiyo-teh-ninjah
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseYov'e GOT to finish this!
someone you didnt know..
2006-11-23
ch 13, anon.
abusehello there Ms. er Divine Star...about Choose Your Path...im just wondering if...you still have plans on continuing ur fic? i mean, the story is kinda interesting...and u know what, im really looking forward to the upcoming chapters you have in mind...that is, if u still wanted to finish it off with a grand finale...*eyes rolling* well, to get to the point, ive been through heaven and hell visiting this damn site to check if uve already updated ur fic and its really bugging me deep down to the core...i mean its worrying me if ure still alive...or are u not? i really wanted to read the WHOLE story of it...eh...anyway, im not angry, if ever i sounded like it, forgive me...well, thank u, i hope u read this one...im really desperate...ive been feeling itchy coz i feel like uve been dozing off...it seems like uve already forgotten ur fic and im still hanging on hopes that u are not...

anyway, im no fan of but im a fan of aeris sephy and cloud...im no author and this is actually the first time i cared to submit a review so please! u know what i mean...i know its not only me who's begging you...=)

04 beLLe 04, Filipina, Female, 20, and definitely, not angry...
Sylla
2006-09-08
ch 13,
abuseHeh, read all 13 chapters in one go, because... I simply couldn't stop! Although, yes, 'return' fics are pretty common, the plotline, descriptions, character interaction... they were all very well written, the end result being that I couldn't tear myself away from the screen. XD

Overall, everyone seemed to be pretty well in character- which can be incredibly hard, so congrats for that. Poor Sephiroth... I could really feel for him, y'know? His mental and emotional torture were very believeable. And... tank you so much for the AerisxCloud pairing- that really made my day.^^

There were grammatical errors here and there, most notably the use of present-tense words when the narration's actually past-tense, but what the heck, nobody's perfect! I think I gathered you aren't a native English speaker, which makes your use of the language (descriptive words especially) even more impressive.^^

Anyway, I'm stopping here so as not to get annoying. It's a great fic, 'nuff said. ^_^
PomeiLione
2006-08-08
ch 1,
abusenice! will read more later

http://pc-ninja.
Bustahead
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseI think you know who this is.

Just a note to say that I love this and I adore this. This will for ever be the original and this will for ever be the best, no matter HOW many idiots try and claim this as their own.

They should all rot and go to hell anyway.

Almost done beta-ing your other work. I am sorry it's taking so long. Send me an e-mail sometime, yes?
Viva-taquitos
2006-07-11
ch 1,
abuseVery good so far. Can't wait til I read the rest of it. :D
Xamaris
2006-07-08
ch 1,
abuse=D Me like. ^^
Aneth
2006-04-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey dear!...Just drop by to tell you a few things..
first of all...I love your fic and writing style...
secondly...Why the hell did you just leave DA?...
I know this is not the right place to talk about this...but, I just can get over it.
You're an awsome artist (in both writing and drawing)and you're leaving because of what a bunch of ** said? I couldn't contact you on DA since I don't have a account
I know I'm not the first one to give you a speech, the first one to tell you you're a kick ** artist, but think about it, will ya? you even have a fan club! you have millions of friends not only because of your artwork, but because you're sweet and kind, and you do have creativity! I admire you, really i do...but now...Divine you're giving up! I thought you were stronger than that! I might not know you, maybe someday I'll be able to.
Maybe you didn't even bother to read this, and it pain me to think about it, but you can as well face the reality:
The world is crowded by jerks. they just can't get a live, so they always try to spoil everyone else's. DON'T LET THEM SPOIL YOUR LIFE! be happy! don't get depressed over such things! We ALL love YOU...
Don't misunderstand...Even if you want to leave DA, there's no way we're going to stop loving you!
You have our inconditional support...ok?
and don't you think i forgot the tird one:
cheer up!!...you're very special...see ya! (what a short review...¬_¬)
MoonFox531
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI haven't finished reading the entire chapter. But I'm glad sephy is back! *does the happy dance* I can't wait to read the rest of this.
And don't give up on your dreams!

Shoot for the moon, and if someone pulls you down, you'll still be among the stars.
Annika Ricaforte Lee
2006-03-30
ch 1,
abuseyay!! i finally found this here! XD

i first read this fic in deviantart but i had a hard time reading prose there, so i started looking for this fic here in yayness! XD
The Dream Whisperer
2005-10-15
ch 13,
abuseContinue! It's very, very good, and I absolutely love the interaction between Sephiroth and Vincent. Please update soon!
whatevergirl
2005-10-02
ch 13,
abuseWow! very good! are you going to write more to this? please do! please! *sniff* i hope you do 'tis very good! :)
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