|Reviews for Backstage 15: Each Proud Division|
| duj 12/9/03 . chapter 4
Wow, majorly weird but in a way that makes sense at the end.
Maybe too much fanfic is rotting my brain cos I'm finding your paragraphs a bit longer than I like. My brain has to engage instead of resting.
Just one more thing I don't know if the problem is with you or me but this is the second of your stories where the first chapter refused to fully load (therefore stopping abruptly in mid-sentence).