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| flipped 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseblack rose! you're killing me.. please. please. a million more please. continue the story! |
| princessyui 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseNice first chapter. Detective Heero who is also a sucker for Relena. I like the sound of that. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Terra 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI adore fanfiction that dares to push the limits and take a gutsy approach in portraying characters. I think writing this piece in first person was very gutsy, considering the main character's the brooding, stoic Heero. Casting Relena (as you described in the teaser) as not as innocent as she appears finally gives her some depth besides the "angelic protagonist" or "damsel-in-distress." My favorite fanfiction revolve around painting the leading ladies as sultry seductresses (or something to that effect) with wounds and motivations and not just pretty, one-dimensional flowers. I suppose I have to like them since I write most frequently about an atypical Relena. ^ _ ^ Props for taking the scenic route. |
| Miss Megaboo 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI don't read alternate universes very often but this is great! This is on the same level (if not higher) than my favorite story "Missing By A Mile". I'm glad you've added other characters in this story, like Dorothy. I'm sure there will be some great plots! ((as always)) This was a very great chpater ((and long!)) But I like long chapters. I can't wait to see what happened to Heero in the past too. ((And Duo of course)) You've got me on the edge of my seat! |
| lizzy 2006-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abusewow just found this fanfic. I know it's been a while since u updated but if you have anymore of the story laying around somewhere I'd really would love it if you'd e-mailed it to me. |
| lilangelita 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds so interesting and cool. I love it that you made Relena a singer and Heero such a cool guy with a fedora. E! I could just imagine him wearing it, too. I really hope you make this a good and long story -- just like your other ones. I'm giddy with anticipation for what's going to happen next!! I can't wait!^^ |
| koriaena 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abuse*blink* interesting so far... ^^ |
| Lady Goldmoon 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI sincerely hope that you continue this story! I love this time period, and this story sounds as though it could be one of the greats! I especially liked the point of view in the story. |
| KatsyKat 2004-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI feel like I’ve opened an old detective novel with *surprise* our Gundam heroes plugged in where the other characters would have went. And I mean that to be one of the highest compliments. I’m not sure what insecurities you had about writing this style story, but you’re off to a suburb start! This piece feels very time period, with all of the characters fitting nicely into their appropriate places. I *especially* loved Dorothy’s description. This was a wonderful beginning! I look forward to your many updates. |
| kirbs 2004-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseoew very good i really like it, its different to some of the others on here which makes it good i hope u continue it please good luck |
| Leena 2004-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHm... now this looks interesting. Rose how do you do it? Amazingly original stories just pop out from your head? I can't wait till you update this. Awesome first chapter! ~Leena |
| Shahrezad1 2004-01-06 ch 1, | abuseNice beginning, this one has really sparked my interest. I like how you're showing everything from Heero's point of view, and in a way that really does remind me of detective stories. His POV is cynical, but a lot more emotional than usual, which is nice. Excellent job, I can't wait until your next chapter. Good luck! |
| Kurizan 2003-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! Update soon, please! |
| Dark Deity 2003-12-11 ch 1, | abusethis is great Rose. I love how you started it out and i can hardly wait to read what every one's role is in this story GREAT JOB! |
| word wise 2003-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh MY God! Who would have ever thought... This is spectacular! Heero a detective, and Relena a lounge singer, and Heero falls for her immediately. The description is fantastic, the whole thing is mind blowing. This shouldn't be just a fanfic. Wow. That's all I can say. Best fic I think I've ever read. -Wordy |