Akane getting off on hurting Ranma. You know that sorta kinda makes sense in a morbid, slightly disturbing sort of way. Kasumi as a martial arts dominatrix ... alrighty then! Its always the quiet ones who surprise you. Sweet, innocent, demure Kasumi is in secret more perverted than Happosai. That also make a kind of twisted, mentally scaring for life, sort of sense.

what happened to your later chapters? They're all double-spaced. I use OpenOffice exclusively for my fan fics. I HATE Word.

Anywho, good story so far. Twisted, but in a good way. ;-)

Dear lord.

*evil smile*

S&M Akane, Perverted Martial Artist Kasumi, and poor Ranma caught up in the middle of it. Freaking awesome idea.

I really do see Kasumi-chan's good intent, even if she is taking it a bit (okay, a lot, depending on just how powerful Akane's, er, fetish is) too far. And I'm kind of excited/scared now... Kasumi's taking these measures to "prepare" Ranma as if Akane were going to stab a stake through his chest while engaging in sexual activity. Is her sadomasochism really that... strong and overwhelming? When Ranma and Akane eventually go at it (I'm assuming they will, since this is a lemon, and If you don't make them I'll be very disappointed, because not only am I fan of this genre *blush*; I'm also painfully curious to see how it would turn out given your fic's unique circumstances), will it really be that... painful? I fear for the baka, and hell, I fear for Akane too. 0.0 But I also find that concept terribly exhilarating.

*notices everyone staring in the awkward silence which has sprung forth*

I dunno, just my thoughts and rambles...

*whistles and walks away*

First of all, I love your fic so far. ^_^

Second, I'd like to ask you to check your grammar. You have some periods in places where there should be question marks, and it's kind of ruining the intense moments~ ;P

VIVA LA LEMONS Y EL CROSSING DE PHANTASMO~! XD

The story was good up till Kasumi...

now i'm just creeped out unfortunately...

dear god, what is wrong with kasumi?

a sadistic akane, a dominatrix kasumi, all we need is a masochistic yet subjective ranma...then it would be a really really fun party...o btw some electricity, some whipping with roses...and a nightclub where all this happen...then it would be trully my taste..

sadistic akane...me likey...me very very likey

weird...kasumi...break...ranma?! that's an interesting thought...can't wait to see what happens with Akane and Ranma after this "breaking"...UPDATE SOON!!

cool

cool chapter and but very confusing i get most of it but i didnt get the one were he broke the table anywho great chapter

Hey This is really good please contiue.

WE auseome story ^_^

that was alsome i can't wait til the the next chapter.

I'm reading this and i'm only 12 yrs old!

Awesome.

Just plain awesome.

An S&M Kasumi and Akane? Sweetness. And I'm betting that once Ranma's done, he'll actually have more fun than usual. ;)

Keep this going.