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| TenWings 2008-02-15 ch 9,  | abuseYOU MUST UPDATE! |
| Nighetray 2007-08-27 ch 9, | abusevery cool hope the more. sorry My reves arnt longer but I never no what to say just know what I like. keep up the good work. |
| Veldrin 2007-07-02 ch 9, | abuseTwo years later may be a little too late for this, but if you have the time you really should finish this story, it's really good. |
| APS 2007-02-03 ch 9, | abuseGreat story, keep up the good work. |
| Black Opal1 2006-10-11 ch 9, | abuseplease, please, please update this...I really, really wanna know how things go for them all...and Xander, he just have to come back from what has him trapped...he just gotta... |
| silverkitcat 2005-09-09 ch 9, | abuseGreat story!! Love it! Go Dawn!! Will Dante find his dad and will he be willing to help? Glad Dante insists Xander's being controlled and hasn't turned. Keep going! |
| kirallie 2005-04-27 ch 9, | abuseWhat exactly did Dawn do to make him so mad? Will Xander be able to free himself? Will Dante survive the trip to see dear old dad? Does his dad like him? Will Xander's mum help him? Keep going! |
| dogbertcarroll 2005-01-09 ch 9, | abuseNice work. What exactly is Trish anyway? Half devil daughter of the M guy? |
| dogbertcarroll 2005-01-09 ch 2, | abuseLOL! Loved the conversation between Spike and Adam. |
| X-Over 2005-01-06 ch 9, | abuseLiked reading these new chapters of yours. Please keep up the good work. Thank you. :) |
| Teri 2005-01-05 ch 9, anon. | abuseHis mother . . . he's right and so are you "that's it". Nice work! Love the update! |
| Layce74 2005-01-05 ch 9, anon. | abuseCoolness! |
| Arjen 2004-07-31 ch 7, | abuseWell, I was right. You did indeed flesh the background out in this story. The different plotlines you've got are interesting. Xander's torture is nicely done as is the way you've got the infighting in Hell. I'm curious about Dawn's role in the story, it's obvious the guns know what she is. Or they have a different reason to protect her of course. Anyway it's interesting and I hope you'll write more soon. |
| Morrolan 2004-07-22 ch 7, | abuseTwo words...Update Soon! |
| ms8309 2004-07-20 ch 6, | abuse... |