I really enjoyed this story. The action was consistent yet believable. You used Ron's voice very well, and did a great job in telling the story form his perspective. Your Ron is also VERY in character. Very very well done. I even liked how you had Susan break up with Harry. It was realistic. Most people have to date around a lot before they find the one (lol except Hermione and Ron.. though that had a very nice build to it and was kept interesting even after they got together... which is hard to do, bravo!)

I liked your writing style and the story flowed very well. :)

This review covers both the Book of Morgan Le Fey and The Final Reckoning. For the record, it is being applied to both stories.

I felt that the two stories overall were great. I didn't appreciate the Harry/Susan paring and I'm glad that you replaced it with Harry/Ginny, the true pairing.

I love the empathy and Ginny/Harry's Empath bonds. I didn't like the fact that the true had to separated after voldemort's demise. i personally believe that the two are stronger together and therefore would come through it together rather than apart.

Ron being a seer was pretty good! Loved the story and keep them coming!

I love this story so much. I read it some time last year, and felt like reading it again :-) I forgot a lot of things, so it was a fun reread.

I love the way you mix romance with adventure. Most fics manage to do only one right, but you did a splendid job on both!

I especially like what you did what Harry/Susan. It seems realistic that not everyone ends up marrying their first high school boyfriend/girlfriend (which is kinda what happens in the actual HP books).

I'm off to read the sequel now, I remember it being just as amazing!

This is so good! Like with most fanfictions, it got better the more I read - in the beginning, the whole Hermione makeover thing threw me for a loop, but you developed her and Ron's relationship really well at school. I loved the Harry/susan pairing as well; it's definitely not a common one, but you did a great job with Susan's character and such, although I think the breakup could have been dealt with a little more, instead of only mentioning it in passing. Oh! Almost forgot to say that the storyline with Eddie and Bellatrix was so creative, and I loved the part (in a sad, horrible way) where Lucius and Draco confronted each other)
All in all, this was an amazing read; thanks so much for posting!
-Crescent

I love this story. I started reading and couldn't put it down, which made it hard to sleep, etc. I love how you characterize their relationship and just each of them, and just really enjoyed their relationship developing as well as the adventure portion of the story.

Great writing!

Epic
really good

Wow! Freaking awesome story! I love it! :D

Nice idea and I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing and you are a good author.

Well Harry is considerate, yay! I like that he brought Ron a sandwhich *snickers*. Oh jeez I wonder what Harry saw. It doesn't look good, and what was up with Ron's dream? That was also bizarre. Ahh so Death Eaters escaped. Damn most of his loyal followers. Serious troubles ahead. Interesting choice for Ron's patronous in your story. AWW DOBBY! It kinda adds light to all the drama and jealousy surrounding them right now. Well I'm glad Hermione and Ron have made up ^_^

...At least I hope they have.

AWESOME! No more Snape lessons but at least Harry gets to be with Bill now! Wow I'm shocked that all of them are actually going to be learning Occlumency but I'm excited about it as well. Poor Harry who seems so angry. I can't get used to this Harry, it's so weird seeing him so closed off. Even when he blocked everyone else out there was always Hermione and Ron he leaned on. Always told them stuff so now seeing him so private makes me feel really bad for him. The hell? Hermione tells him something that hurts RON and she starts crying? I don't even know what to say to that...

Smart move Harry in the end there. Hilarious. Kinda funny Hermione trying to xplain Shakespeare to them ans I wonder when Ron will admit he likes Hermione and ask her out. He's never really acted out on his feelings much, in this fic his feelings explode like x10! It's crazy. And I wonder if Hermione even reciprocates those feelings 'cause she mostly acts indifferent with him while Ron blushes with even the slightest glimpse at her. Interesting that they're going to get the DA working again (WOOT!) And again I'm hoping the ease of all three of their friendship will come back soon.

I kinda wonder how this difference from the sixth book is gonna turn out. Here they're actually taking Hagrid's class whereas in the book they didn't. It made me laugh out loud at the fact that poor Harry and Ron got xtra homework that night. YAY something to hopefully cheer Harry up. I liked the way Ron handled the first mention of Sirius after such a while. Well leave it to Malfoy to mend H/R relations. That's kinda of amusing to tell you the truth and I'm curious as to what Bill needed to talk to Harry about.

Does Ron have competition now? I wonder if in your story you'll add Lavender. All the girls' reactions to Eddie are hilarious! No one can argue like Ron and Hermione. You proved it here. I actually felt slightly annoyed at both of them. That was an unexpected turn of events. Bill the new DADA teacher? Seriously? Now I really hope the 'curse' doesn't continue. The only part I felt slightly uncomfortable with is the fact that Ron feels almost in a sense devoted to Hermione. Whenever they've had arguments both stubborn sides never really gave in. Rarely did he ever "plead" to her. So only that part did I feel was OOC. Another thing, it's unlikely Dumbledore wouldn't announce the new teacher after the feast so I'm surprised Bill wasn't introduced. Jeez Ron is actually aggravating me here. I wonder when Harry/Ron/Hermione will get back to their swift friendhip. Everything seems so tense right now.

The twins are HILARIOUS! Always love their addition but it's kind of painful to see how awkward it is now between Harry and Ron. I'm sure it won't be like that always, right? Sweet that Hermione gave Quiddicth another go. I feel kinda bad at how envious Ron is of Harry, but since this is in Ron's POV I can really see that. Wish he didn't feel like that but hey what can you do? "‘Although Quidditch can be number one on occasion,’ said Fred. ‘But if it happens that Quidditch is number one, it usually means you’re not getting any of number four. Actually, that’s true of everything else besides number four.’" *ROTFL!!* Your scores weren't too far off with what they actually got in the sicth book :P Wow that was an incredibly bitter outburst by Harry. I wonder if Ginny also felt the painful feeling Ron did when he watched the Harry/Hermione interaction.

"Whose death was it that he was seeing? The person whose brain had burned him? Someone else? Did it have anything to do with You Know Who?" I'm slightly curious to know if what he is seeing are in fact memories and what it is that's bugging Hermione. Hermione's very jumpy. Maybe she's afraid someone's going after her? Or maybe that Death Eater's spell had a more lasting effect? I haven't read book 5 in a while so I don't remember a lot but was she really struck with a spell so strong that knocked her out for 2 days? I don't remember that...Wow they're really scarred with this. Seeing Hermione so emotional makes me feel a bit sad and then it also makes me wonder if Ginny, Neville and Luna are suffering through something like this too?