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| km07ap 2008-05-06 ch 41, anon. | abuseThis is the second time i have read this story and i am absolutly in love with it!! i find it fantastic and if it wasnt for the fact that i have to read it from the screen i would read it all the time! i want so badly to print it out... |
| GGmadness2006 2008-03-27 ch 41, | abuseThis is one of the best Ron and Hermione stories that i've read. It really was amzing and i enjoyed the Harry and Susan interaction but was glad that you ended it. I got to say amazing job and ill be now going to read the sequel. I bet its just as great! Love RONHERMIONE! |
| gudiya 2008-03-10 ch 41, anon. | abuseThis entire story is beautifully written! I loved the Harry/Susan pairing- I never liked Harry/Ginny anyway. Anyway, you're a great writer, keep it up! This definitely helped me with my HP withdrawal since I finished Deathly Hallows :) |
| rex41e 2007-12-31 ch 41, | abuseAwesome, just plain awesome... You my dear LavenderBrown is now one of my favourite authors. Awesome is all I can say... Now off to read The Final Reckoning. Let the new year begin. |
| Shadow Cat17 2007-11-02 ch 41, | abusei love this story! I just had to read it again, because I really like how you keep the characters in character and at the same time adding your own little twitst and turns! |
| xox-emily-xox 2007-10-09 ch 41, | abuseAhh, Im pretty much speachless. That was FANTASTIC! Your an amazing writer and you portrayed everyone perfectly.. I cant wait to start reading the sequal! (So Im off to start doing that now! lol) |
| Hermy WonWon 2007-08-22 ch 41, | abuseI didn't read the first version, but I quite enjoyed your re-write of the story. I thought your character interactions were great, and especially loved in-denial-ron at the start of the book and how awkward he was with Hermione at Honeydukes. I also enjoyed his interactions with Harry, especially thier heart-to-hearts. It was nice to see Harry have a normal relationship for once, and I didn't think that Susan came off horrible in the end. It was a realistic way for her to react. Great job and I look forward to the sequel. |
| silver.wings.34 2007-08-09 ch 41, | abusewow. oh wow. that was such an entirely AMAZING story! I cried in parts, laughed through most of it and longed for a ron to call my own. you are a truly gifted writer and i hope you continue. keep up your talents. the world deserves your work. |
| TrixieThePixie 2007-07-21 ch 41, anon. | abusei luv the plot! its very awesome! ur like the new J.K. Rowling!! -runs off to see the sequal- |
| wellwisher 2007-07-17 ch 41, anon. | abusefantastic, I read all 41 chapters in a day (rather than studying for my exam >_>). I loved your characterisations, your choice of a pairing for Harry was great; I didn't expect it but it worked very nicely. The story and general plot points were incredibly well executed and it flowed along very nicely. I've become a rather large fan of the Ron and Hermione pairing through this (heh), their relationship and interaction was brilliant, and rather helped along by the more mature approach to some aspects. On to "The Final Reckoning" tomorrow after exams then! |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2007-07-16 ch 16, | abuseLovely lovely, do enjoy the awkwardness, and the disease discussion, cause thats fascinating. |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2007-07-11 ch 13, | abuseBlimey is right! Oh the magic of mistletoe and the awkwardness of parents. And I must say I quite like Susan and Harry, though I was a bit confused at first because I didn't realize Amelia Bones was still alive and hadn't been killed in this fic. |
| Blonde-Existentialist 2007-07-11 ch 6, | abuseSo this is where I stop for the night, but I stop with a giddy grin and happy warm feelings inside. So far I love what I've read as well as your writing style and storyline so far. |
| MelindaGriswald 2007-05-29 ch 41, | abuseThat was amazing! It took me over a week to finish (with school and whatnot) You are such a talented writer! I must say I like your version of the 6th book much better than the actual version. I think the only thing you could do would be to maybe fix some technical errors (like how Ginny's name is Ginerva, not Virgina) and stuff like that. But great story! On to the sequel! |
| Katelyn 2007-04-26 ch 41, anon. | abuseOh My Goodness, this was an amazing story, i loved every second of it...i couldnt stop reading it...i just wanted it to never end...it was fabulous, you should definately write more!! |