this is a cool story

WHaT THE CRAP WHY DOES THIS JUST END!?!?!?!?! SERIOUSLY!?! ITS REALLY GOOD! PLEASE!

that. was. amazing.

holly + gold + greed = fail

oh my god this sounds good :)

I've been off my AF kick for - God, almost two years now, but now I'm - sort of - back (and I'm pretty sure my writing has drastically improved, *finally*) and the first thing I did was check out my old favourites...
And you STILL haven't updated.
So, if there is any chance, that this fic is not abandoned, please, PLEASE update moderately soon. It would make my life.

shout abuse you gotta be kiddin i love this

I LOVE THE SOTORY SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO MUCH

to much swearing but it was pretty good i really liked the plot

hey this story aint bad try for another chapter

(i told you I was rereading it . . .) can I hae the deleted scene?!?!?!? and all other deleted scenes?!?!?!? This is one of the most origanal stories I've read in a while . . .

man you havent updated such an awesome story in 2 years =( just when it was getting to the good part

i like it, funny

i like

I have two things to adress:

A= FRICKIN' AWESOME! Holly kidnapping Juiluss was GENUIS! I also loved the fight. Could it be better? Lovin' Chix's comment too! They're fighting over Trouble, right? I really don't know, but it was HI-LARIOUS!

2= UPDATE, DAMMIT! I have the need for Holly to have the need to get her brains ** out! Please! Please If I could italiseze, these next words would be- PLEASE PLEASE, please! (itialics off, thnx) But reall, This is a great fic, that needs a new chappie, lickety split. I read your profile, it said you had the next one, and I know school is stressful and I probobly dont know the full of it yet, but if its almost done, then please get it up, wwith all begging necessery! I am, however, full prepared to ester you. I will. I swear to God/Frond/Krishna I WILL nag you to the next milania, Ibara and back. You will hear so much of me that you'll actually knw what al those mean, even if you havent read the books. I'M DESPREATE! I HATE SEEING STORIES THAT ARENT ABANDONED BUT SEEM SO! I BESECH YOU!


kthnxbi