Wow, that's a neat way of looking into the mind of Mokuba. We all know he is smarter than he lets on, but this was something different entirely! Very good job, I'm completely impressed!

Wow, your portrayal of Mokuba is very disturbing, but I absolutely love the originality. And I do believe that the little brother does have some extent of control over Seto in an unnoticed way. Nice work, I love how Mokuba doesn't like Joey, but deviously pretends to just to get his brother to fight.

Nice work!

This is an excellent piece of work. A terribly original take on Mokuba, and a well-executed loose plot that gives off a sense of uncertainty. Wonderful!

A little weird and dark but original and interesting.

that was good. really enjoy it ^^

wow i stumbled upon this on pure chance and well... its really dark, and poweful. very well written though, its intense and calm at the same time. and very disturbing and eerie. im so scared of mokuba now lol!
a great piece, very original as well. ^_^

cool!

Owl

Holy **...this has got to be-*stutters*-it-it-I...
I have NEVER read anything like this before...WOW. It's so...POWERFUL and it draws you in...

Interesting. I don't quite understand what Mokuba wants, though.

Now *that* is an interesting take on Mokuba. It was very well done... and now I think I'm a little scared of Mokuba. Good job

Whao! Mokuba's evil! Very disturbing... Good fic tho!

Beautiful as are all of your stories, Nightmare-sama. Your interpretation of Mokuba fits almost exactly with my own--he isn't as innocent as those pretty coal-hued eyes lead you to believe.
-Rie

Um...O_O...Good but also a little disturbing...