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| RandSpyd 2005-11-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that's a neat way of looking into the mind of Mokuba. We all know he is smarter than he lets on, but this was something different entirely! Very good job, I'm completely impressed! |
| Hope Wheeler 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, your portrayal of Mokuba is very disturbing, but I absolutely love the originality. And I do believe that the little brother does have some extent of control over Seto in an unnoticed way. Nice work, I love how Mokuba doesn't like Joey, but deviously pretends to just to get his brother to fight. Nice work! |
| VSSAKJ 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is an excellent piece of work. A terribly original take on Mokuba, and a well-executed loose plot that gives off a sense of uncertainty. Wonderful! |
| MikariStar 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseA little weird and dark but original and interesting. |
| Kawaii Angelwings 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abusethat was good. really enjoy it ^^ |
| Elusia 2004-10-18 ch 1, | abusewow i stumbled upon this on pure chance and well... its really dark, and poweful. very well written though, its intense and calm at the same time. and very disturbing and eerie. im so scared of mokuba now lol! a great piece, very original as well. ^_^ |
| RainOwl 2004-08-04 ch 1, | abusecool! Owl |
| ChibiSerenity3 2004-05-16 ch 1, | abuseHoly **...this has got to be-*stutters*-it-it-I... I have NEVER read anything like this before...WOW. It's so...POWERFUL and it draws you in... |
2003-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting. I don't quite understand what Mokuba wants, though. |
| purplechaos04 2003-12-26 ch 1, | abuseNow *that* is an interesting take on Mokuba. It was very well done... and now I think I'm a little scared of Mokuba. Good job |
| Angel-soul03 2003-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWhao! Mokuba's evil! Very disturbing... Good fic tho! |
| Violation 2003-12-12 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful as are all of your stories, Nightmare-sama. Your interpretation of Mokuba fits almost exactly with my own--he isn't as innocent as those pretty coal-hued eyes lead you to believe. -Rie |
| Ieyre 2003-12-10 ch 1, | abuseUm...O_O...Good but also a little disturbing... |