i have tears in my eyes. a truly wonderful and emotional story. very beautiful. you've created a masterpiece, and thank you for sharing it with the world.


Jone-Z

A very sad story, but one of the most beautiful I have ever read.

Well done

Beautifully written, the part where Luna died really touched me.

Beautiful. Well done, indeed.

-demonicnargles

Very beautiful.

Very sad.

Thank you.

Tom A.

Beautiful.
Just ... beautiful.
So beautiful, in fact, that it hurt. I even cried. In a pained, happy, nice way. And if you wonder how that can happen, well, its the way of beauty.
BEAUTIFUL, thanks.

that was a amazing story im feelin depressedknow cause you didnt givethem a happily ever after well i hope you make more storys like it i was really good

thats beautiful

Wow. Phew. Great story--wonderfully and simply written. I'm impressed at the depth of character development there was in it--and quite fitting.

Thank you for writing and posting this!

i like

I don't really know what to say, this is unlike any thing that I have ever read and it is simply amazing, a simply charactor that we hardly knew any thing about and you managed to turn her into a beautiful person.
I also liked the fact that there was nothing romantic going on with Harry and Susan, this is not some thing that would norally happen, a baby from friendship, but it was perfect, as was the love that Harry had for Luna Lovegood.
Thanks for the amazing read because believe me, they are hard to find.
Harald (Kara)

Easily my favourite OS. Got me all teary-eyed. Damn you, that was beautiful...

Oh, that was a really beautiful story. Obviously pre-canon, but who cares. It was lovely. I especially liked the line 'Every time Harry's name was mentioned, they would tense' about Ron and Hermione. Very perceptive.

This was a fantastic story! You did an incredible job developing the relationship between Susan and Harry. I love her transformation from girl on the sidelines to being one of Harry's closest friends. Obviously this was written before books 6 and 7, but your take on how the war may have gone was believable and well thought out. And I love the Slytherin version of the DA. Couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes, and I'm always on the lookout for those.

Excellent job! I enjoyed this immensely!

such a sweet and sad story. My heart almost broke when he begged her to not let his kid grow up like he did. And that Luna knew bad things happened to the people Harry loved and went on with their life together(as short as it was).