 snuffernosegary5 2006-05-15 . chapter 1The oft-neglected, multi-faceted Warrick/Sara friendship was shining in this GSR. I could nearly hear the characters' voices throughout the story it was so true to the series. |
 Pheo 2004-07-31 . chapter 1I just loved this story (as usual with your masterpieces!). I took two discs with me to study abroad this spring, and I wanted to let you know that this was saved on one so I could read it over and over again. My favorite part is the dialogue at the end--it's so coy and it just flows so well. I also really liked the interaction between Sara and Warrick. You added a whole new dimension to the word "trust," and, as usual, your theme and parallels were woven together in a symphony of written greatness. Please keep writing!! |
 scigeek 2003-12-29 . chapter 1This was good. I liked how Sara handled this. It's the way it was back in her first appearance. She did her job. She didn't worry about what the other CSIs thought about her investigating Warrick. Nice throwback to her origins. |
 Jane Doe 2003-12-27 . chapter 1I think this is a boom baby! "BOOM BABY!" hehe Oh I just loved this -- Warrick’s struggle but persistent trust in Sara, Catherine's hasty bitterness, Nick’s willingness to follow, Grissom’s confession or story of his life, and finally Sara’s resistance to Grissom showing how badly she was hurt.
Oh it just kicked butt! Two thumbs way WAY up!
~Jane |
 Batsy 2003-12-20 . chapter 1This was another good story. You write really well. I like all of your stories alot.
I like how Grissom told her everything. That was a good way to show her how much trust he gives her. |
 jenny-o 2003-12-18 . chapter 1I really liked this story. Everything about it was in character. I could easily see Grissom expecting Sara to do something like this and never considering what it would do to her. |
 nancy 2003-12-14 . chapter 1 I'm glad you decided to return to ff.net. I was wondering why you hadn't posted your latest stories here. I can't imagine why they banned you. All of your stories have been wonderful. This place is run by fools, I think. Okay, hope that didn't get you banned again! LOL |
 katbrian 2003-12-14 . chapter 1Cool story. You nailed Grissom down - why doesn't he trust Sara, when he's willing to overlook everyone else's mistakes. |
 bugsandbeauty 2003-12-10 . chapter 1Geeklove! *le sigh* |
 mossley 2003-12-10 . chapter 1I loved this story. The way you wrote Sara was very true to life. She was going to get treated like crap, but she rose to the challenge and did her job.
You, my dear, are simply the best! |
 aliceinwinterland 2003-12-10 . chapter 1 Oh, man, I thougt I'd be suffering after the end of Jigsaw, but here you have a new one out! Love it. Hope you keep posting more this often! |
 Kerina 2003-12-10 . chapter 1 Wow. I just love everyone of your stories. Your very talented. |
 fran 2003-12-10 . chapter 1 You write very well. I like how you explored the whole idea of their trust, and rebuilt it. You have a great command of the English language. A lot of other writers could learn a lot from following your lead. |
 Peggiegg 2003-12-10 . chapter 1 Oh Burked! A stroy from you ALWAYS makes my day! |
 Carla Sanchez 2003-12-10 . chapter 1I really like this story. You have a great grasp of the characters and your plots are never boring. |