 Verse12 2003-08-10 . chapter 1I've looked and looked for something with a superman wonderwoman relationship fanfic. and in the process i found this short story. this is a story that hits on all the points of the characters involved. the characterazation of superman and diana was spot on. his grief over lois and his desire to remain true to her memory was so touching. you see so much diana bruce stuff, but s fics with clark and diana a more obvious couple are non existant, i loved this, and i hope for more. |
 Kaylie-chan 2001-01-04 . chapter 1 Great story and all, really touching, but I'm afriad I'm lost. Woh was "she"? Lois? ::smack's self:: Duh! That makes sense. ;) But what was so horrible that made poor Supes cry? I mean, how did everyone die? How did Clark Kent die too? When you said that, I thought somebody had discovered his secret or he had given up his alter ego or something. You could make this sort of a series (or just a long stand-alone story) to explain a few things of this, such as a flashback. Anyway, I'll stop with the constructive critizism and tell you something else: I still thought this was a cool story, the way you captured Superman's emotions and brought them out. Please write more! ^_^ |