While certainly intriguing, I can't really call this story successful. It's so vague that it fails to amount to much of anything. It's obvious that the author knows exactly what is implied by all of this, but the text leaves so much unsaid about the technique in question (and Ranma's feelings about it) that it renders the whole story basically meaningless. Most unfortunate.

How do you write a fic about someone smarter than you?

How do you describe the unknown?

What does yellow taste like?

This fic has those problems but you have done a pretty good job.

Now if you would only continue it.

Heheh...

An interesting story, ContraCarrotBardusGlace. An interesting story indeed...

sounds...intresting.

moar?

O.O VERY STRANGE.

wow! I like this one!

A great but simple story. An invincible martial art that ranma won't use, is a brillinat concept especailly with the final few paragraphs.

This is an excellent story but to completment it properly I would need to give away the plot, so all I can really say is, read and enjoy.

The technique seems to have left Ranma sexually confused, the training seems to have left Akane emotionally confused, and the story left me just plain confused. I can only assume that the technique involved pressure points in places on the body that are normally off-limits. This fic was...just plain weird. That's all I I have to say.

horrible, were u sober for once when u wrote this?

lol

You are really evil. I liked it!

This story is interesting, I wonder what will happen next, please continue soon!

Do you have any plans to continue this (even if it is NC-17)? It sounds like this technique is more like a 'submission' technique than anything like what the Wrecking Crew is thinking of.

It wasn't martial arts but marital arts? Does this mean that Ranma conciders himself a woman? You have to do a follow up to this, if at least to explain Ranma's final comment. Still a cool story though. The guys reactions to thier demand that Ranma demonstrate Asura's Fingers to them would be priceless.

hey this was like pretty cool, but i think you really should like make a sequel, there's just too much stuff left unresolved, like what about cologne forcing akane to teach it to shammpo, or what does ranma mean at the very end, will akane abuse this new power, ect. other then that it was a great fanfic!