WOW! This is really, really good! You've captured the characters perfectly!

I enjoyed reading it.

Oh, yes. I read this awhile back and liked it. Well worth reading again! Excellent job! I like stuff where you get different character's points of view on the same scene. You could do some more in that vein and I wouldn't mind at all!
Geek Mama

Wow! This is really well written! I always thought that was a dramtic scene! You've kept the characters true to the movie! This is great!
JessieRose

Woohoo! First reviewer! :)
This is a beautifully written piece. It's interesting that no one has written this scence before. You do it wonderfully - bueno.