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| ShadowWolfDagger 2007-05-16 ch 3,  | abuseawesome beyblade story.cant wait till the next update.hope u do soon. |
| TouchOfChaos 2006-05-30 ch 3, | abuseOnce again the chapter is short!...I'm guessing Celina is Tala's OC? Please can you describe the people? ...I |
| TouchOfChaos 2006-05-30 ch 2, | abuseEh? Why the chapters so short? |
| TouchOfChaos 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseHAHHAHAHAHHAHA! Ray having b-b...! That's just plain funny! Heheheheh. |
| vines-throughXfate 2006-01-02 ch 3, | abuseYou know wat sucks?? the fact that u dont UPDATE!WHY ARENT U UPDATING!? WHY ARE YOU SO CRUEL!? ^_^ its really interesting, so if you dont update soon, im gonna send you msgs over, and over, and over, and over again! ok? got it? yes? good. iight, thats all, later! |
| Jojibear 2005-05-11 ch 3, | abuseHm... Tres interesant! Keep it up! ^__^ I love it! Keep updating! ^_~ |
| SailorNeo 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay then. I'm back to torment you since you have anonomyous reviews. I won't be as mean if you update...Yeah, I know it's bribery, but I really like this story! Please write it! Oh, and read my Beyblade fic too. It's got Elementals in it. It's fun! But please do update! I love this story and I actually have both versions on my laptop. But I really do wish that you would update for me because I love this story and I really want you to write some more. But you should also read my fic! |
| Tikytikytavvi101 2005-01-01 ch 3, | abuseYay! I love Tala's little brother! In fact I love Tala! lol! continue soon please! ur story id so coolies! PS: Coolies is a word i made up! -TIKY- |
| FalconDance 2004-10-25 ch 3, | abusegood chapter! each chapter seems like a cliffhanger to me! LOL! Update soon! |
| evezzz 2004-10-08 ch 3, | abuseNice story, so far! Keep up the good work, and please update soon! ^_^ but... Kai with a cheerleader? *sweatdrops* ah well, it's your story ^_~ |
| Kick-flare 2004-10-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseSozz couldn't be asked logining in. feh, ... *takes a deep breath* It is really good!! Can you update soon? And what's going on between McGeger and DEzi? Email me and could you review my stories, the links are in my profile, may be I should have signed in.. feh, Cheers Kick-flare |
| AthleticBlueFire 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseahem, hey dude. question: WHERE THE FREAK IS UR UPDATE! U TOLD ME U WERE UPDATING SOON! U told me u had ur chapter almost finish, and now, u don't have it up yet! I'm so gonna kill u! :p, u betta go on tomorrow (For ur info, its saturday) so :P hmph |
| Luna-Chan - Psychodynamic 2004-09-05 ch 3, | abuseYey! I love this story! I think it is going to be awesome!! Oh... I'm sorry about your great-grandpa... |
| SailorNeo 2004-09-04 ch 3, | abuseI WANT MY KAI! BRIDGET HURLEY WANTS TO MAKE OUT WITH KAI! YOU ARE EVIL! FINISH THE STORY AND THEN DIE! |
| SailorNeo 2004-09-04 ch 2, | abuseDEAD DEAD DEAD! YOU MADE MY WONDERFUL KAI GO FOR A FRICKIN CHEERLEADER! DEAD DEAD DEAD! RUN AWAY! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE! DIE! DIE! DIE! |