you spelled apoligize wrong.

wierd story

no ending?

1) Punctuation check. Not Every Word Is Capitalized, which is what you do sometimes. For example "Chandler's Face".

2) Maybe you can get a beta reader. they are really cool and it helps alot!

3) UPDATE SOON!

continue soon...)

As your first reviewer, I'm saying it's brilliant! Of ocurse I'm biased as it's CnR and your my 216 buddy, but this is great! Continue soon, and keep them together!