Oh, this story was really good! I love how Ash has Charizard again; he's my favorite of Ash's Pokemon!
This story was very exciting and couldn't wait to see what was coming!
Poor Ash! He has to choose between May and Misty? And I'm glad that Brock found a girl who liked him, too!
Very good!

intreasting so far.

^^; Well, finally got around to reading this... finally... So sorry I've been behind on reading and reviewing things... (sigh)

Anyways, this was a pretty interesting chapter. ^_^ I like the extended flashback here, as it gives more depth to the prophecy and storyline. I hope Ash learned something from it... or everyone might be in trouble. ^^ Anyways, great job, keep it up, k? Until next time!

-Samantha McPhoenix

well done

cool

hehe *sweatdrop* I see now. This chapter was cool. And I'm watching Pokemon right now. But yeah, I liked the chapter. I'll be waiting for the next ^_^

hi! I like ur story. I hope you can update soon. :)

Is Jack the wanderer? I like the story so far, so I hope you can update soon. I find it... intriguing. I like the ideas, so I hope you can post more soon! ^_^

Good chapters.Sorry it took me so long to review.Hope you update again soon.Ja.

Nice. Very nice! ^_^ The Ash/Misty/May thing is getting interesting, though it seems kinda strange at the same time. (shrugs) It just seems sorta OOC on Ash's part... But what you have done with it is good.

The only problems I see so far are the tenses seem to constantly change throughout the fic. Sometimes it's present tense, other times it's past tense. It needs to stay one or the other. For a story like this, I'd suggest past tense. The other problem is that there are a lot of choppy sentences that would work a lot better linked together in some fashion. For example, the following sentences from your fic:

"May turns to Ash to find him smiling at her. May can’t help but blush even more. She can feel her entire face turning crimson."

It would read a lot more smoothly if it were something like this:

"May turned to Ash, and, upon finding him smiling at him, she couldn't help but blush even more. Her cheeks burned a bright crimson."

Of course, a few short sentences here and there add a change of pace as well. (shrugs) It's challenging to keep a balance. If you'd like any other ideas, you know how to talk to me. ^_^

Well, in response to your review on Pokemon Colosseum... Mercenaries, in my world, really are careers... not good ones, but careers nonetheless! They're just so good that they're really in demand, leaving the likes of Alexander no real reason to need any other means of making cash. Plus, he's flexible. He can be a thief, assassin, soldier, spy... anything like that, he can do. So there are a lot of opportunities for him. ^_^ Not that I'm promoting criminal activities, of course...

Well... I'd figure that if I added a Wes-Rui-Kimberly triangle to the mix, it'd make it way too confusing... Two triangles is enough. ^_^ Besides, as you'll come to see, Kimberly isn't exactly a romantic sort... she has barely any idea of what that means... at the moment...

And there's my review! ^_^ Keep up the good work in your fic (I'll try to do the same with mine!), and I'll talk to ya later... See ya!

-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)

Well, this chapter was short, as you said... But it does pose the interesting dilemma of Ash's feelings for both Misty and May. I can't wait to see what you do with this little plot twist...

In response to your Pokemon Colosseum review... Alexander's hair is aqua-green. Well, at least that's what it says on my colored pencil that I color my pics of him with. ^_^ Mwaha... really cute... But then, you probably think I'm weird for being a fangirl for my own OC... Hahaha...

Anyways, keep up the great work whenever you can. I'll be emailing you in a few minutes... So hope to hear from you after that. (attempts a sweeping bow, like Alexander... and falls flat on her face) Ow... Ok, until next time...

-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)

This story is pretty good so far. It must've been really hard learning that your brother died in battle. I'll keep you in my prayers.

Well, it's true that in the real world that we haven't cracked the genetic code yet. But, of course, in the Pokemon world... ^_^ Just take a look at my psychotic, lovable clone scientist Rich Monroe.
Rich: (is beat up from the latest chapter of Pokemon Neo) Been there, done that...
(tosses him over her shoulder) Um... I guess I'm trying to say that in fanfics, anything is possible. But back to the review... I liked how you sent Team Rocket on a wild goose chase... ^_^ That should keep them out of the way for a time. And I also liked how Misty whacked Mark and Sara with her mallet. I wish I could do that with some people I talk to...
Keep up the great work! ^_^ See ya later!
-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)

Good chapter.Hope the next is up soon.Wonder how long its going to take Team Rocket to figure out that there is no Wild Goose?Ja.

Hmm... lighthouse, eh? I would think that it's Dragonite, then. That's the episode with Bill and all that... It rather disappointed me, I thought they would make Bill more cooler... and since he's a researcher, I would have expected him to recognize a Dragonite when he saw one. But that's just me...
Nice chapter, of course, and the idea that Mewtwos are actually male forms of Mews is a unique one. I wouldn't have thought of that. I've noticed this before, but you occasionally drift from past tense to present and then back again in the story. Try to watch out for that. But otherwise, a good chapter.
As to your review on Pokemon Colosseum... what exactly were you referring to when you said "that could get annoying"? Were you referring to Rui's talking on and on? Or maybe my original characters? I wasn't sure. I just wanted to know what you meant. ^_^ Wes/Rui forever! They definitely go together, I agree. And I'm not sure how many chapters I'll be making for the story... But there will be a lot, I'm guessing, seeing as I'm on the fifth chapter and I'm barely through with Phenac City...
Keep up the great work, ok? See ya later!
-Samantha McPhoenix (aka Pichu*Star)