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| Deus-Ex-Machina 2007-12-18 ch 4,  | abuseGood story, hope to see more soon. |
| Taiki 2007-08-04 ch 4, | abuseGood story. Please have more out ASAP please. Later. |
| Nysk 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseShame I missed this story at its conception. But I do like what I have seen. Hope to read more. |
| Requiem 2007-08-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseAnother critique: Ryouga is one TOUGH bastard. Ranma cannot just hurt him. Even incredibly angry like that. Your powering him up too much. I apologize but I will have to decline reading further. |
| Requiem 2007-08-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseBig Critique here: even if Ranma can control his curse in a limited way (bad, bad author! no treat for you!), he STILL wouldn't REQUEST to go to school as a girl. he might be pursuaded (big maybe there) to go to school as a girl for those reasons, but in no way would he request it. Major OOC moment here, at obviously a critical plot point. |
| James Axelrad 2007-08-03 ch 4, | abuseits a great fic. looking foward to more! |
| Jerry Unipeg 2007-08-03 ch 4, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) I am looking forward to see Ranma and a Zentraedi fighting and Ranma using chi attacks. |
| ranko lina Inverse 2007-08-03 ch 4, | abusewait Ranma not a pilot or some type of fighter in the EDF that don't make sense Ranma a fighter. Can't see him being a mechanic. |
| Wonderbee31 2007-08-03 ch 4, | abuseNice part here, and interesting to see how things have changed for the rest of the crew, and will be looking forward to the next part with the launch. |
| Porthos112 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI've read chaps 1-3 and find it quite enjoyable, a little simplistic and light on explanations of how things happened, but still quite good. One thing you need to change, the suburb in Tokyo is NERIMA not NERMIA, a simple but very annoying mistake for anyone who's read the manga. Keep up the writing and hope to see a quick fourth chapter |
| Kalhur 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abusePlease update. This has great potential to be one of the best robotech/ranma 1/2 crossovers. Please don't let this fic die. |
| MattCauthon1 2007-02-05 ch 3, | abuseHow about another chapter? Really interested as to where this is going. |
| ranma girl 14 2006-02-08 ch 3, | abuseplz update soon ^_^ |
| goku 2005-10-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseryouga not getting lost? just because he's accpting responceability? no i just cant see it. also why would ryouga just forget about akari? and you need to explane more about ranmas trick for controling the curse |
| Tigger-69 2005-10-03 ch 3, | abuseInteresting twist, very good way of seperating Ranmas old life and adding him to the new one. I look forward to seeing how he does in the EDF. Please continue. |