plz keep writing

Uhm...well...I have to say that its a good fanfic...but...I'm kinda confused about the whole thing about Harry and JAMES. Well...heh...please review! I like it, even though the characters scare me...heehee

I like this one. It wasn't very descriptive- how exactly did Snape sexually abuse him? As far as I can gather, he just, well, humped him, through clothes. Doesn't it have to be penetration to be sexual abuse? At least, that's how I see it. Not to make this personal or anything, but it kinda reminds me of my childhood... Only I didn't want my dad, I just wanted someone to want me the way my parents want each other. So.. yeah, enter sister's pedophile of a boyfriend. but let's ot go there. It's just a suggestion, but maybe in the next chapter, Harry can explain to James what happened? From experience, partners don't care that much about if you're 'used'.. It just makes them more gentle. Sorry, stories like this always get me going about my past. God, I'm only 16. I really sound like I'm 40 or something, don't I?

Anyway, great story, can't wait for an update

Very good, but i do think Harry overreacted a weeny leetle bit, no?

Overall... well i would say nice but thats hardly suitable. Its interesting. Can't wait for the next chappie!

wow...its cool but..harrys a little whinny dont ya think? but its ok everywhere else! MORE SOON!

3 words update,. update and NOW

I hope you continue this one. I'm writing an incest fic myself and if you ask me it's kind of difficult. Maybe you could read it yourself?

wow...that's bout all I can say in this state. But yeah good wow. So um update on this please. I really like it a lot and I'm not a big fan of this kind of stuff so this is major compliment. Plus you 're a great writer!

very good, a very new idea that i've never seen before :D hope you update soon !

keep writing _

Good and angsty! Now, this is the part where I beg for an update, right? Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, (are u annoyed yet? no?) please, please, please, please, please, please, pretty pretty please!

This is really good. To be honest I've never actually read a James/Harry incest fic. Surprisingly, I actually feel in love with this.

Oh, oh update this one too! It's not somethhing I read most of the time, but I like it.

Evidently we have much the same tastes in fiction. *grins*
Your story is thin in places - it skips quite fast through the plot. You would do well to flesh it out and add detail, slowing it down some - show, don't tell, your characters' feelings for each other. You'd also do well to sit down and work on one story at a time, and try to finish these. :) You've got some good potential.

Ok this fic is very odd indeed. Although I do not agree with what you wrote, and I do think it is extreemly gros. I did read it and you have a right to your own opinions. So no flame from me.
However on your writing style could use a little bit of work. I am saying this to help you become a better writer. Your style is a bit blotchy and simplistic. I find that you a skipping over some major plot ideas. I don't know if you were writing this as a joke or as an actual fic.
If well writen thiws could be an almost acceptible fic if not for the content, (not my cup of coffee) Anyway, if you add a bit and lengthin it out slowing the pace it could be better.
Sorry for the long bitchy post I tend to get bitchy during exam week. I sorry. Forgive the lady please quack princess Tutu I will piriette your ass haha ok I am nuts it's ofcial quack

I blame you for ruining my make-up!
The sounds coming from Sirius' room are just so bloody funny! My ribs hurt as well... You are very talented in the humor genre. Try to focus on that.
Now, will you excuse me when I lock myself up in the bathroom for an hour, to re-apply my make-up?
Continue please ... after all, the more chapters you put up, the more reviews you'll get.
Don't keep them begging.