Reviews for Cry of Orphans

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gaby47 2008-01-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseok now seriously dude u have to update this now! u are killing me LOL i love this story i mean its so sad but im atractted to it..im hooked! update ASAP PLIS AND PLIS LET ME KNOW WHEN U DO I WOULD REALLY APRECCIATE IT! GREAT WORK KEEP IT UP!! ALREADYA HUGE FAN :)
dysney 2007-12-18 ch 12, anon.	abuseI reread this chapter about 4 times over the past year and a half. I still consider this your best story. It may be a while, but I'll be here whenever you decide to update. This is a heartbreaking story.
Kristal 2007-11-12 ch 6,	abuseI know, I know, I'm a horribly pesky bug. BUT, I just sat through the day rereading this story... I began with chapter 6, read backwards to four, then read chapters 1-3 and then I read 7-12... I'm an odd sort, aren't I? Anyway... you do realize how horrible of a cliff-hanger this last chapter was, right? And you do realize you haven't updated in a year and 5 months, right? AND you do realize I'm begging for you to update, right? Well... I hope you update... I don't think you updated anywhere else (I think I've check remotely recently). Please update! Pretty please! Continue ASAP Laterz, Kristal WRITE NOW
Jackie 2006-08-11 ch 12, anon.	abuseWow! I just found this story and stayed up till 4 in the morning reading it (an even bigger accomplishment cuz I was thoroughly jet lagged). This isn't normally my kind of story. I tend to lean towards the mushy, S/V happy ending, BS stories. But this was so amazingly written and so interesting and so believable that I was sucked in and wow again. I can't wait to see what twists and turns come next because you are a truly gifted writer.
Carey 2006-07-06 ch 12, anon.	abuseI really love this story. I wish you wouls update this soon
Valoriahn 2006-06-29 ch 12,	abuseHi, this is a great fic! Very angsty though, like you said. :) It's been cool to see the past through all of the characters eyes and I hope that Vaughn is OK! Please update soon!
Kristal 2006-03-24 ch 10,	abuseWell, I was sick all day today and I decided to come on and look at my profile... well I looked at the plot of this story and I missed this story so much, so I decided to read this story entirely, all over again! Do you know how long that took? Anyway, you know what I would love? Well I would love to read the next chapter of this, it makes me so sad that you haven't updated in ages, I simply adore this story, and I am truely anticipating the next chappie like crazy! Anywho, please update this! Continue ASAP! Laterz, Kristal WRITE NOW!
Sasha 2005-11-30 ch 11, anon.	abuseI just read the whole thind in one sitting...it is amazing...Will you do me a fave? E-mail me and tell me if you are still working on the story, if you've stopped, or if you're taking a long time to post. I just want t oknow because I absolutly love it
Agent Pheonix 2005-09-26 ch 11, anon.	abuseYou HAVE to update soon! I love this story. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz You havn't updated in ages! ~~Anita
TheBhoys 2005-09-06 ch 11, anon.	abuseI hope you plan to continue this
Titania1 2005-07-08 ch 1,	abuseI found this story after it was highly recommended on TWOP as an ideal way for Jennifer Garner's pregnancy to be included in Alias Season 5. I have to say I think it's an absolutely wonderful story so far and I hope you update soon. Sydney is written in a painfully realistic way - in so many fanfics Sydney is an overly idealised woman - here she is very much flesh and blood and all the more hauntingly effective for it. I have to confess however that I am rather hoping you don't go down the typical Sarkney author route of having Vaughn killed off so that Sydney and Sark can whaltz off into the sunset with Taryn and Analise. I don't mind the Sarkney pairing per se but the tendency of Sarkney writers to marginalise/assassinate the Vaughn character to enable the central pairing gets a little grating. A story as wonderful and bitterly complex as this deserves an equally complex resolution.
Kristal 2005-06-08 ch 11,	abuseOHOHOHOHOHOHOH! You haven't just LEFT me there! OH! :P Meanie! So I'm going to camp on the 18th... feel free to update before so I can print it out and read it while at camp... so I don't feel all alone at camp with no computer or fanfiction for a whole 4 weeks! AW! Insanity! So begging PLEASE update by June 18th... pretty please, with ice cream, and wipped cream, and hot fudge, and warm brownies, and, and, and a cherry on top! Update ASAP Laterz, Kristal WRITE NOW
twin*muse 2005-05-15 ch 11,	abuseah!! I think I missed the last few updates cause my email is on crack! THIS IS SO GOD! She had another girl! e! I love this..ya know me... hee.. Colly E. of twin*muse
Beboppin' Betty 2005-05-14 ch 11,	abuseE! I've been waiting forever for you to update! Great chapters. I'm anxious to find out about Analise. Can't wait for the next update.
electric pancake 2005-05-14 ch 11,	abuseI would send a review consisting of nothing but exclamation marks, but I don't want to. You are EVIL to leave it there, EVIL I tell you! I'm almost whimpering because I want the next part. And I really, really want to cry, but that would make my family think that I'm weird. It's so good and emotional. And I love it.

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