I just read this fic and it got me really fixated on it from beginning to end. The way you build up the story shows how much talent you have as a writer. Wow, this is a really fantastic story. Great work!

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Agent P!nk

Great Story!

Your story is very good ! Thank you very much !

Wow what an epic. Thanks, I really enjoyed this. Please write some new stuff soon.

Nice job! I live how you bring them back to the bench and the ending- awesome descriptions and the flow was perfect.

Oh, what a wonderful ending! I was so saddened when it appeared Sam was going to leave for good at the end of the last chapter, but this is just wonderful. You have such a talent for understatement - the J&S moments are so touching, especially when he gives her back her things. I loved how you wrapped up the case, but I especially adored how subtly you wrote their 'ship - yet still conveying the deep feelings they obviously share. What a great mystery and an even better read! Keep writing! :)

This was a lovely ending to a good story. The way you've left things is perfect.

Wow, I can't believe it's done. Great job!

illman, you rock! What a great ending. I liked how you jumped to the future-it got right to the point of the story.

oh sam *sigh* she's going to run away? That's awful. How will Jack feel when he finds out? How about Danny-he seems to be dealing with all this much better, at least for now.

wow-poor Samantha. Having a panic attack, and Maria visiting her, that would stress anyone out. I'm really enjoying this story illman :)

I hope that for once Victor doesn't act like a complete ass and he helps Jack! Please update soon!

I really really hope Jack knows what he's doing.

aw danny and sam got to see each other again. And Jack is going to see Victor Fitzgerald? What does he hope to find out?

Poor Samantha, reliving some of those memories must be awful. And Jack, leaving her a note as a goodbye, and to seek justice *sigh* i hope he won't find himself in danger