Reviews for A Different Kind of Innocence

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Dantaron 2006-03-07 ch 3,	abuseAwesome. That basically sums up my impression of this story thus far. The Adepts were so perfectly in character, and your view on Saturos and Menardi being good-natured was superb. Saturos writing songs and poetry in Imil was a great touch, and Sheba putting up an act to get close to Felix fits with her sly personality. Well done tracking Piers' progression from independent sailor to friend. The game moves from the reluctant Piers in Kibombo to the companionable one when you regain his ship, and the slow transition isn't really accounted for. Felix. Excellent job. My impression of the Venusian is of a tough exterior and a caring heart, but you played this even better. I really wish I could read "Blaze", but ah well. Keep up the writing!
Ayumi187 2005-08-10 ch 3,	abuse@_@ This is SO adorable! I love the part when Sheba was pretending to have the nightmare and Felix started stroking her back. It was so cute! And thank you for acknowledging the fact that Sheba is 14. It's so annoying when people have Felix and Sheba make out. It's really quite nasty. 14-year-olds are not supposed to make out and sleep with ANYONE. You're not updating! UPDATE!
Flora Jupiter Vixen 2005-03-31 ch 3,	abuseFlora:Sheba you bad girl! Vixen:Luv the story! If anybody doesn't I'll sick Blaziken onto them! Blaziken: Blaze!
X 2005-03-18 ch 3, anon.	abuseGasp! Oh, no! I'm so sorry! My last review was for another story! YOUR story is absolutely wonderful. Felix's character is perfect, I just don't think he would be mourning Saturos and Menardi. They blackmailed him to come with them. Trust me, I can easily remember some of the Proxians saying stuff like that. And the others wouldn't be mourning, either. SATUROS AND MENARDI KIDNAPPED THEM! The only reason I think anyone would be sad about them dying would be because S&M knew where they were going. (I also don't think S&M were in love, but I don't really have any proof of that aside from the fact that they don't seem like the people who would fall in love.) Enough of my criticism, sorry about the mix-up and keep writin'. I love Lighthouseshipping, but it's so underrated and everyone likes Windshipping. ('Cept for me, of course.) :)
Pata Hikari 2005-02-28 ch 3,	abuseSo cute! Heh, I really don't get Ivan/Sheba. They hardly interact! Anyway, nice semi-adapt og GS2. ^_^
X 2005-01-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseEverything's fine except for Felix's character. It's not that he didn't want to be bothered by another girl, it's that he didn't want to unnecessarily involve anyone in the whole lighthouse problem. :) I know almost all worth knowing of Golden Sun matters. Trust me. :)
Vered 2004-12-22 ch 3,	abuseI loved your fic. (Long live Lighthouseshipping!) The way you wrote the characters aptly showed their personalities. Could you repost Blaze? (I never managed to read it.) Why was it deleted anyways?
ryoko-sama1 2004-11-14 ch 2,	abuseit's really good!please continue! btw, I could take alex off your hands for you, my sister needs something(or someone)to vent her anger/happiness on other than me^-^;
Gilly 2004-11-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseMore! More!
Resilient K. 2004-09-12 ch 3,	abuseBad, bad Sheba... oh well, all's fair in love and war. I never thought of Felix and Sheba's relationship in that kind of way, but it's really interesting! I liked it. Good story - don't worry I've read the previous chapters - they were all good too. Felix crying over his foster parents, and that part about red symbolizing mourning - that just made me go, "AWW!". Anywho, continue! I like, I 'ike! \| Dreamer(me):I wish I can write as good as you can... sighs heavily, head obviously in the clouds Lelei(my muse):Keep dreaming... Yuhei(my other muse):Hey, be nice, sis... as for your fic, WE LOVE IT! LONG LIVE LIGHTHOUSESHIPPING - DIE WINDSHIPPING! Dreamer: Isn't that ironic? Die windshipping, and I'm gonna write one soon? Hehe... \| CONTINUE!
Master of Reality 2004-09-09 ch 3,	abuseHey, this is a pretty good story! And Lighthouseshipping! Yay! Love it! Felix/SHeba forever! Okay, maybe I like that pairing a little too much... I've already recently read "Blaze"( fortunately BEFORE it was taken off) and I thouroughly enjoyed it! And now I've had a look at this, and it is great! Woo! Need more Felix/Sheba fics, methinks. You have a great writing style, and always manage to put in interesting humour. Oh yeah, liked the idea of Sheba pretending to have a nightmare to get close to Felix... he he, so cute! Well, update soonish.
Cerul the White Paragon 2004-09-08 ch 3,	abuse^_^ Fluff!! I love fluff! I guess you could tell which part was my favourite, right? This chapter turned out really good! ^^ And I'm very happy because you finally updated!
Cami of Queenscove 2004-09-08 ch 3,	abuseAw... giggles It's so cute... Heh... huggles Felix I wanna adopt him in your fic... he's so... EP! Huggable! So sweet and gentle and sensitive... sighs Now if only I could find someone like that... he reminds me strangely of the dude in my so called life... the one jared leto plays (HOTTIE!)... Hmm. I think too much. It's so cute though! Maybe we could get some Piers/Jenna action in there. Or... if you're feeling particularly ooc, you could always stick Piers and Felix together... prods Heh... jk. It really wouldn't work with your story... well... it may have if you had stuck it in there before the whole "bad dream" sequence, but eh. Hehe! Okay. Stopping now. Love ya much. UPDATE!
Avari wind seer 2004-09-06 ch 3,	abuseFelix/Sheba fluff! coughs I'm not obsessed, not at all... ^__^ Great character interactions in this story; the dialogue makes the whole story fun to read.
Anya shojo 2004-09-06 ch 3, anon.	abuseOh, Sheba's a baad girl... Alex, good luck with the rabid fan girls (I have a feeling you're gonna need it)

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