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| AliasSpyCrazy 2007-01-26 ch 1,  | abusehey that was pretty cool! granted, i dont like scott and jean stories, i just dont see them being together. kind of like your story, they seem too comfortable with each other, like there's no passion at all. like two best friends...LOL... BUt i really did like this story. it was really good. and like you said, everyone see's things differently. and that's why logan and jean in my mind so need to be together ~_^ but yeah, great job with the emotions and dialogue and especially the thoughts. keep it up! |
| beowulf 2006-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat a lousy story. jean and scott loves each other. she will nvr break up with him. write something better lah |
| CalliopeMused 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI think the screenwriters of the X-men movies wanted to make all characters disliked except Rogue and Wolverine. With no exposure to the characters but the films, Scott is a prig, Logan only has a heart around Marie, and Jean looks a bit too long for a secure relationship. This isn't happy, but it's true. The truth most always isn't what you want to hear. |
| Dani 2004-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was horrid! How could you break up Scott and Jean!?!?!? Yet it was well written. Maybe you could write a happy fanfic... |
| AngelWings8 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. I found this both moving and deeply perceptive. Nice job. |
| *~ 2003-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseJean wasn't a sympathetic character in movieverse and it's nice to see you finally acknowledge that. Quite frankly, I thought X2 justified all the bitchy Jean fics. Scott deserves better than Jean and I heard he's going to get a new love interest in X3. Hopefully someone who'll adore him the way he deserves to be. |