I read both of these stories. I cried during both of them. So many people die from drunk driving. I am only 14 but i know how many people make the mistake of geting into a drunk drivers car.

Saqwoo! Fraduz! Run, Tinky-Winky! Gryssax! Faster, or you shall never escape the ACLU and its band of miscreant squids riding lawn gnomes! Juytka! As long as there is a Hungry Jack Meal in the fridge Neo will never give up and neither shall we! Baroof! Wdunk! I used to have genital herpes, but then I realized surpressive therapy is right for me! Yorf! Get the test. Get the polyp. Get the cure. Two-twenty, we're on it. Zadna! The rule of Gondor is mine, and no other's! Hybgraff!

you said in the description to not read it without having a box of tissues beside you or something like that...did that mean that it was supposed to make ppl cry? cuz it didnt seem all that sad to me...o and thats an awesome song! i read one of your other stories, a helga/arnold one and it rox...good charlotte songs for every chapter or something like that...update that one soon i dont feel like reviewing it

such a sad story.. and the song is awesome! this is on my favorite story list!

Good story, It was really well written. You were able to show really well what the characters were feeling, expressing anger, sadness, that feeling of emptyness, ect. Things that are hard to write without sounding sappy or cheesy, but I think you accomplished it. Good job.
On an unrelated topic, why do all the people on this site listen to such crappy-** music?

*crysob* that was so beautiful. i used to always be afraid of what i would feel if someone i loved died but after reading this...and i swear i'm not just saying this... i think it wouldn't be so hard. i was never convinced that whoever died would really be with me still but now, i think you described it so well that i actually believe it now. if that is not talented writing than... seriouslah what is?
you are the greatest writer!! if you ever have any time, i'd love to read more of your RP fics. Twister's Song is my favorite fic of yours yet. i think it takes talent to write stories to the tune of those songs. you actually take the lyrics and turn them into a story. i dont think i've ever met anyone that can do that as well as you can. :D

*Sobs*

That was so sad!! Both Rodriguez brothers end up dead!! Poor Twist, committing suicide...poor Lars and the accident!! *Blows nose on Kleenex* What a sad, sad fic, but a very well-written angst-filled one!

I really did like what Clio said to Reg at the end, about how Lars is still with her, but in spirit, and stuff.

This was very moving, but very beautiful.

I really liked the one shot, but may I make a suggestion? When you write a songfic or write a fanfic that has a song writen into it, please put the lyrics in italics. It makes the story easier to read becuase you can tell the stroy from the song. I have three song fics and have read other songfics as well. Trust me, this makes a BIG difference.

Damn that's a good story!!
You where right i really needed a tissue box but i didn't had one so i used my sleeve.
I really liked this part:
She got in her car and made the drive, then walked around, looking at all the graves, until she got to the Rodriguez family circle. She saw Twister's grave, and stopped to look at it. It had been 10 years since he was gone, but time healed the pain. She looked next to it, and gazed upon her husband's grave. She sat down on it, and read the inscription like she had a million times. She began to cry as she said "I miss you, Lars," quietly. She cried uncontrollably, her tears streaming down her face and hitting the ground.
Long huh? I dunno why but i like this part best.
owh and umm. it kind of looks like the really end of 'emotions' (from Silent Whisper) but the only part that doesn't fitt in that stuff is when twister died, because in that story he had an overdosis thing.
But you story was really cool!!
Hope you'll write more stories soon.
Later much,
Cloud

hay! good fic! but i kind of had the same idea as you... you see i just posted a a song fic to "my immortal" but its about Reg griefing for twisters death. just telling you that i did not mean to copy you in any way! it just was a cowincidence!

So sad :'( Poor Lars. Poor Reggie. Well written, it reduced me to tears.