Harry is really self-centered and inconsiderate, no? he could at least think of how awful Hermione must feel! She's done so much for him..

Aw I really like this, its a shame you aren't going to finish it (I presume) - but hey, let me know if ever you do :)

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list.

Jan

well harry might not feel sorry for snape, but i do :-( and harry too though. its all very sad.
i notice you've stopped though. i dont know why i havent read this one before. its ages old. i must have thought id already read it or something...oh but it was when i was in newmilns, wasnt it...hm. i know you're focussing more on your orignal fic but its frightfully mean on your poor adoring fans :-D who don't get to find out what happens in these stories of yours. if you must write novels, please get them published so i can read them!

aha, so the close connecton with snape and malfoy starts early on...
sabinus is a very nasty piece of work isn't he! gosh! vibius, by contrast seems much nicer than the adult lucius we know and love/loathe.
again, stylistically this is going really well with the alternations between snape's speech and description of what happened in third person.good ending to the chapter too.

gosh, thats a bit darker an ending than i think jkr is going to go for...what with the 10 year olds reading her books :-) harry's really bitter! i like this though, its interesting. you are, after all, very good at dark (hence the fascination with dear severus, i suppose...). we've already seen a darker side of harry in ootp than previously shown, as a moody teenager. here you're aging that in itial start, and coupled with the tragedies poor ole harrys had to suffer and witness, i can see that bitterness is a logical progression. you've got the atmosphere going really well between snape and harry, the dialogue:description ratio works really well there.
why does everyone expect harry to be there to see snape? i suppose if they're that much alike by that stage...

It works really well to have Snape's life story alternating with his meeting with Harry, raising interesting parallels between past and future.
Please update soon!

I'm glad you're doing Snape's life story, he's the deepest character really.
Full of interesting insights. I'm glad you tied his family history in with the scene from the Occlumency, that's always upset me, and I'm certain there has to be something behind that which will crop up later on in canon.
I find the blood bonding suitably disturbing...
The Mage Room is a great idea

Great start!
How did I miss this one? You manage to combine the inevitable with the unexpected in a way I've never seen before...

Okay, submitting this after my other review, just so you know.
1: AH! I share a birthday with Snape! (yes, that freaked me out, thank you for the heart attack ;)
2: What happens to DRACO?

Interesting. I'm mildly amused by the fact that Snape - and, hey, McGonagall - expected to see him there, knew where he was going. And I wonder what Snape's going to ask in return . . ? I guess I have to wait and see. In Summary: I liked it and I'm interested in more!

Pretty depressing, but I'm really enjoying it!

This is an interesting spin on the character of Snape. I don't think I've ever seen anything like this before. I like it!
I know this sounds moronic and annoying, and it's probably the most overused phrase in reviews, but... Update soon!

this is a sad story but its really good!! it will get better for harry wont it? is hermione going to eventually have a part?

It's funny how Harry becomes most like the one person he hates most. This really is an excellent story, please continue.