Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: I Wasn't Expecting That!

KrazyKarah
2004-12-09
ch 5,
abuseThis is great. I love it.
cutiepie3932
2004-06-24
ch 5,
abusegreat story, update oon. LOL
kaili
2004-06-18
ch 5, anon.
abuseplease write more i want to know what happens when lucy finds out who shoot them.
Tinkerbell253
2004-02-01
ch 5,
abuseGreat. I can't wait to find out if it was Jimmy that shot Kevin and Roxanne or not. Update soon!
lexi
2004-01-24
ch 2, anon.
abusei hate to burst your bubble of all the happy reviews, but...if someone got shot in the neck they are not going to be fine! they would not be home in a week or three, they'd be dead or very seriously injured. This story doesn't make sense and the grammar and such needs work. Don't like lucy and roxanne pregnant at the same time. Don't like a minisiter getting his girlfriend pregnant outside of marrige. Not exactly a good example.
hanny
2004-01-12
ch 5, anon.
abuseo great!
Kelly
2004-01-12
ch 5, anon.
abusethis is a REALLY good story! keep writing, i can't wait to read the next chapter
srgirl6
2004-01-11
ch 5,
abuseNice story.Update soon.Please don't let anyone die.
kevinforever
2003-12-15
ch 4,
abuseupdate asap
bec
2003-12-14
ch 4, anon.
abusegreat. luv how both luce and roxanne are pregnant. kevin and chandler will have a lot on their hands...keep; it up
kevinforever
2003-12-14
ch 2,
abuseupdate asap
hockeygirl7
2003-12-14
ch 1,
abusePlease continue and not make Kevin die
reg
2003-12-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseawesum
Return to Top