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| KrazyKarah 2004-12-09 ch 5, | abuseThis is great. I love it. |
| cutiepie3932 2004-06-24 ch 5, | abusegreat story, update oon. LOL |
| kaili 2004-06-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseplease write more i want to know what happens when lucy finds out who shoot them. |
| Tinkerbell253 2004-02-01 ch 5, | abuseGreat. I can't wait to find out if it was Jimmy that shot Kevin and Roxanne or not. Update soon! |
| lexi 2004-01-24 ch 2, anon. | abusei hate to burst your bubble of all the happy reviews, but...if someone got shot in the neck they are not going to be fine! they would not be home in a week or three, they'd be dead or very seriously injured. This story doesn't make sense and the grammar and such needs work. Don't like lucy and roxanne pregnant at the same time. Don't like a minisiter getting his girlfriend pregnant outside of marrige. Not exactly a good example. |
| hanny 2004-01-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseo great! |
| Kelly 2004-01-12 ch 5, anon. | abusethis is a REALLY good story! keep writing, i can't wait to read the next chapter |
| srgirl6 2004-01-11 ch 5, | abuseNice story.Update soon.Please don't let anyone die. |
| kevinforever 2003-12-15 ch 4, | abuseupdate asap |
| bec 2003-12-14 ch 4, anon. | abusegreat. luv how both luce and roxanne are pregnant. kevin and chandler will have a lot on their hands...keep; it up |
| kevinforever 2003-12-14 ch 2, | abuseupdate asap |
| hockeygirl7 2003-12-14 ch 1, | abusePlease continue and not make Kevin die |
| reg 2003-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesum |