 ella 2006-12-07 . chapter 16 Is "In The Hall Of The Mountain King" really one of your 4 favorite classical pieces? If so, then how in the hell did you think WAGNER wrote it? It is the first suite of Edward Grieg's composition "Peer Gynt", which is the incidental music for the Henrik Ibsen play of the same title. Grieg was a Norwegian composer and pianist known for his concertos, while Wagner was a German famous for his music dramas.
Wow.
By the way, this is barely a School of Rock story at this point. It's now a forum for you to self-insert "Zan", a ridiculous Mary-Sue, into the world of SoR, just so she can hook up with Freddie, feeding your pathetic obsession with a fictional character. This story is not intriguing; it's not well-written; the grammar is patchy at best. To top it all off, you don't ever mention any of the other CANON characters, many of whom are quite a bit more fascinating that Freddie Jones. You have wasted 30 minutes of my life with this story.
Show mercy towards other readers, I beg of you. Give up now, BrandedButterfly, give up now. |
 IrockHARDERthanYOU 2006-07-26 . chapter 17k I've been following this fanfic for a while, but this is the first time I've reviewed. Just to clear things up, this is NOT a flame. I like your story, and it's really good, and I can see that other people like it. But, I really don't like the way you've made Zan progress through the story. At first, yeah, she was pretty bitchy and emo, but that's because her life had sucked and she had no friends. Then, when she got some friends at her new school, she got nicer, but kept her bad-** edge. And that was good, because that's realistic and she's likable enough, while still in character. With the last few chapters though, I've liked her less and less. It's like she's gone from one extreme to another just by moving to a new house and school. And it's not even that her friends have influenced her, because they're "rockers" too, and she's become a prep. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against preps or nice people at all, it's just that she's changed too much for real life. Anyways, I know this was a long, boring repetetive review, but keep the story going and try to make her less of a Mary Sue. |
 Carryin'daBannerGoil 2006-07-19 . chapter 17PLEASE! continue! It's awesomeawesomeawesome! |
 Zeppelin Girl 2006-06-14 . chapter 17what a bad girl!
keep goin |
 mcekul 2006-06-11 . chapter 17awesome story. update! |
 Friends Not Food 2006-06-08 . chapter 17Nice! Thanks for updating! No complaints. Can't wait for more!
- PaperclipsAreEvil |
 Samalamadingdong 2006-05-30 . chapter 16Write more please! I love this story! |
 His WHOREcrux 2006-05-08 . chapter 16Sorry, it's gonna be short!
I loved the story... I've been checking back obsessively ever since i started reading fanfic... and thought it's about time i commented. Great job, i love the character of Zan- her and Freddie are cute together! |
 i-heart-pluto 2006-04-19 . chapter 15This is the second time I've read this story, and I still like it, but there are a couple of spelling and gramatical mistakes.Even though it is a stereotypical story and some bits make me want to scream, it's pretty good, and I like it. Update soon! |
 mesaqt 2006-04-19 . chapter 15 keep going it is good |
 ljubezen 2006-03-28 . chapter 15lol normal human feelings... thats funny... haha anyways nice of you to finally update... lol but yea a new chappie soonish? |
 mesaqt 2006-02-05 . chapter 14 keep going it is good |
 ljubezen 2006-01-28 . chapter 14aw... poor zan. i feel so sorry for her... |
 iLUVfire 2006-01-26 . chapter 1kewl!! kewl, nice job. ill read more l8er. |
 milk carton mug-shot 2006-01-22 . chapter 14I love your story so much!! You have to update as soon as you can! |
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