Great story. Love it.

'I know what Hermione said to you. In fact for the past three days I’ve been awake. Physically I might have been asleep but I was mentally awake.' Harry said. 'I heard everything.'"

lol. Wtf is this, a soap opera? Seriously, what the ** is with him being in a coma?

Also, why is he in a hospital? Wouldn't they have healers at the game? And, that "he can't apparate excuse is BS. Don't they have portkeys?

“'Doctor!' I yelled.

He turned around to face me but avoided looking into my eyes. 'Yes ma’am? What do you need because I need to attended to your friend’s womb. We’re going to put him in emergency surgery.'"

What happened? Did Harry have a miscarriage?

He was pregnant!?

That was OOC and stupid. Why would Harry care? Wasn't he just banging Katie?

are you alive??
you haven`t update in two years

melanie.. u havent updated in a while!! =) well hope everythings okae for u in the philippines.. take cares!! -Andrea =)

Thats a good short chapter! keep writing cause you are so good!

AYAKA! Goddammit, e-mail us! And today, it's Candice's B-day! She's fourteen and she's grown up! ::sniffles:: Aw. Go text her . . . What the heck have you been doin' nowadays, hunh?! =P Hehehe . . .

~Kris

oh gosh! this is such a cool story! PLEASE consider doing a sequel!

Another great chapter the cliff hangers always keep me reading.Keep up the good work.

nice story! keep writing!

Keep going! I love Harry/Hermione fanfiction!

wow, nice story... please, continue!

How dare you make Harry do that! Harry would not ever do that! But keep up the great work and write more!

Here is a list of the items I noticed in your fic that you might want to revisit.

1. Tense. Try to stay in one tense.
I’ll use the first part of the fic as an example: There he is…. Green eyes, black hair…everything I want back. I continued to watch him as he approached the table. I look beside me and I saw Ron sitting there.
If anything, this should be: There he is. Green eyes and black hair, everything I want back. I continue to watch as he approaches the table. I look beside me and I see Ron sitting there.
2. Comma Usage. I’ll cite one issue here, direct address.
“Hey Ron.