|Reviews for Forgiven|
| HawaiianCaffeine 11/26/10 . chapter 2
Oh, come on... this isn't an end to a story. This is like... the 2nd part to a three part series. Less than that... this is the 2nd part to a ONE or TWO paragraph less than a full story. All he needed to do was turn around, go back, kiss her, ask for marraige, then live happily ever after! Hmm...i shall either be looking or waiting for the sequel... :)
| Blueberry Babe 11/3/09 . chapter 2
m ya could use some more of an ending ..but then.. you could have left us to make our own endings.. lol hope you can put an epolog on it.
| Lady Fluffy 8/1/09 . chapter 2
I found this to be a very good story, it was well written and you can see time and thought was put in to it. although it is a somewhat sad story, i would like to read more of it to see where you would take the story, i can imagin where i would but i would like to see more of your writting
| mthgirl 11/28/08 . chapter 2
if he's craving anything its love right? because he didn't have it for his whole life and she was the only one to give it to him. you always want something as powerful as love so that should be it right? just a thought.(this is the longest review I've written that wasn't filled with 10 exclamation points.)
| w0ah 8/18/08 . chapter 2
oh god, I love this two-shot. you were right, I do want it to be continued ) I just loved the plot in this and everything that happened. A good fan-fiction is one that leaves you thinking about it once your done, and i must say, this is one of those. once again great job! )
| Kibi.s2 6/26/08 . chapter 2
I really like the story!
| Gothic Lust 6/19/08 . chapter 2
i love this idea so do continue!
| clock-winder 6/19/08 . chapter 2
i love the story! it's really original
| Uncoloured186 6/2/08 . chapter 2
don't know what should i write...
| Uncoloured186 6/2/08 . chapter 1
i like it :)
| my name is paper YAH 4/28/08 . chapter 2
ah...so sad. please. do something that will make this story not sad anymore. cries silently
| won't be the Victim 8/3/07 . chapter 2
Sorry but this ending sucked major! It's gets your hopes up then crushes them in the mud. well what ever, good plot-
| ShadeSpirit 12/13/06 . chapter 2
Wow, this was sad. I really like it and I'd dearly love it if you added one more chapter to it. I just...wanna know what happens. It seems unfinished and leaves me feeling rather dissatisfied. But it is truly a wonderful work.
| star 7/20/06 . chapter 2
will this be continue?
| Hime-Kagome Higurashi 7/13/06 . chapter 2
Is there a sequel?I hope there I hope Kagome will end up with Sesshomaru again.