m ya could use some more of an ending ..but then.. you could have left us to make our own endings.. lol hope you can put an epolog on it.

I found this to be a very good story, it was well written and you can see time and thought was put in to it. although it is a somewhat sad story, i would like to read more of it to see where you would take the story, i can imagin where i would but i would like to see more of your writting

if he's craving anything its love right? because he didn't have it for his whole life and she was the only one to give it to him. you always want something as powerful as love so that should be it right? just a thought.(this is the longest review I've written that wasn't filled with 10 exclamation points.)

oh god, I love this two-shot. you were right, I do want it to be continued =) I just loved the plot in this and everything that happened. A good fan-fiction is one that leaves you thinking about it once your done, and i must say, this is one of those. once again great job! =)

I really like the story!

i love this idea so do continue!

Hey!

Update! pls...

i love the story! it's really original

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don't know what should i write...

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nice work!!
i like it :)

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ah...so sad. please. do something that will make this story not sad anymore. cries silently

Sorry but this ending sucked major! It's gets your hopes up then crushes them in the mud. well what ever, good plot^-^

Wow, this was sad. I really like it and I'd dearly love it if you added one more chapter to it. I just...wanna know what happens. It seems unfinished and leaves me feeling rather dissatisfied. But it is truly a wonderful work.

will this be continue?

Is there a sequel?I hope there is.And I hope Kagome will end up with Sesshomaru again.

You can't be serious...THAT is how it ends?!? I hope you do continue it although it seems rather unlikely hehe.