update!

well, that was lovely, I am too fond of Alceta, as it is. And oyu writing, is very good...you use metaphors and similes, quite a bit of sarcasm too. Oh well, I hope this review has been of importance to you.

OOh deary, I was a bit grumpy in that other review... but you have convinced me of the story now and I will be back to read more! Lovely and bitchy-ful, much fun indeed, the convent girls seem just like the 'cool crew' at school. Carry on and update! It's so annoying the way you keep hinting at what is going to happen to Alceta, and I can't read the end of the book to find out...

I like your idea. It's very original and realistic for a girl from a very civilized society. The suspense is very well done, not cheesy, or anything. Please update soon!

well done, please update soon. I'm very fond of Carole, and Alceta/alice already.

update soon! _

intresting... when will she start her magic? will she be going to the palace? update soon!

Aw. u won't be nice and tell me. (puppy eyes...) _ anyway update soon! and happy holidays

I really like your story so far, but i dont understand how Alice/Alceta doesn't question everything, because she wouldn't know about the gift or anything which has been mentioned in front of her.I just thought you could have made it clearer what the Goddess had told her anything about where she was going, if anything. But otherwise, its a great start; it has that thing that makes you want to read on and be interested, and also you don't make grammar mistakes(unlike me)which I hate reading. I'll be returning to read more if you'd like to continue the story! Ta chuck, and merry Christmas

Update! when will she find out that she has a gift? and things like that? _

update! it's a very intresting story...