Your story is really wonderful!! I wish you would update soon!

Please continue! I found this story on the Ginyu Force fan site a few months ago and have been hoping to see a new chapter for a few months! Please continue!

I just read this chapter, and all I can say is KEEP GOING! Jeice cracks me up and poor Zarbon, I'm sure he's seen better days. Wonderful as usual!

I know what you mean when work sometimes gets in the way of writing a good story and I applaud you for doing so well. I LOVE THIS ONE! Zarbon is definately one of my favs and you do such a fantastic job! If you can please update real soon! I'm anxious to see what happens!

This story really grew on me - the chapters kept flying by so quickly! I couldn't believe I was on the second-last one when I came on this afternoon to continue reading. I'll refrain from begging for more because I understand people have lives beyond fanfic, so I will simply place a small parcel of my wish to be able to read on right here. There we go.

Oh, the story's really picking up now! I'm enjoying it muchly. I like the way you're introducing all of the characters and their roles in the tale and I particularly enjoyed the conversation between the Ginyu force. Most amusing!

I think it's fascinating that you don't tell us the real names of the four girls. It seems to reflect the fact that their pasts don't matter any more - well, to those around them, that is. It's as though they're trying to protect their old life by facing this new situation as different people.

The drama and fear in that last scene was very well-handled, too.

C'mon, you mad son of a guttle-fish! Update! I *need* to read more - like you say yourself, there's very little high quality reading out there (especially where Frieza Forces Fics are concerned).

Sorry I haven't reviewed in ages. I've actually been printing this out and reading it in bed, so I forgot to review. Hey, it makes good bedtime reading ^_^

I read your story a couple of months ago on Its really really good. The problem is you rarely update and people lose interest. I myself go for stories which are updated at a least month. I hate it when I'm neck deep in a story and realise too late that its abandoned. Ohh...and if you decide to continue please make Zarbon fall for the girl. There arent any good Zarbon fics out there.

Love the story. I can't wait to see what happens to Bulma and the slave girls. Keep up the good work!

Ok see the thing is I love the fic with Kat in it and I think this story is interesting too, but there are like 3/4/5 things happening at once and I'm thinking 'Combine Already' Its wierd because I wish the plot would speed up so twists and such will be revealed and ok ok All I really wanted to say was please plot thicken more. But other than that its great, really, good job

Kudos to you for updating... something I haven't done in nine months. Don't feel bad. There is always someone more pathetic than you. ^_^;

Fantastic job as usual, though I questioned the usage of the words "cottoned on". Perhaps it's only because I've never heard it before. In any case, bravo!

Wow, great opening!!

hell yeh im still reading!
loved the chapter by the way!

There is something wrong with this world when a story as good as this has barely any reviews. I'm going to go back (in the morning) and review every freakin' chapter of this gorgeous piece of work. Go you for still writing it! Bravisimo!