Great story. Love the happy ending :)

absolutely brilliant!

That was awsome! Well done!

I like it! its very good! plz wright again soon!

bloody smoking!

finished it all in one sitting...glad I did not have to wait for the last episode...

Best of the 'child of Hannibal' stories.

Will be looking for more of your stories in the future..

Cheers...

brilliant work. I loved how you portrayed Clarice and Hannibal's relationship and I think that you represented each character very accurately. I also really liked Emma's character and thought she was an interesting oc. Very well done!

so happy you continued this story! it was worth to wait.

sorry that i didn't review before but i was so caught up in your story. I really like. Keep up the good work.

W2UL

Hi!

Many kudos to you for picking up this story once again and continuing with it. It's a real delight to read and I'm totally immersed in it. Hope you'll have more chapters soon!

Nan:-)

I've only just begun to read "Hannibal" fics, and so therefore, I've never considered any romantic chemistry between Lecter and Clarice. I was somewhat grossed out, when I first read this one, but the more I thought about it, and about the fact, that Lecter never did anything to hurt Clarice, in fact kissed her in that kitchen, and that Clarice never really did any greater effort to get him, made me realize something: That they in some degree, albeit in a very sick twisted degree, in reality had fallen in love with each other. So I came to the conclution, that I really love this take on them and their chemistry. I'm twisted that way.

I came across this one, because I checked your profile for more H/C fics. I saw this one underneath, clicked into it and began reading by sheer nosy-ness, and found myself loving every bit of it. I love that Emma wasn't horrifeid to learn, that Lecter was her father, and that she wasn't mad at her mom, for keeping it a secret to her. And I love that nevertheless, how cruel Lecter is, his one soft spot was Clarice. And that Emma also filled that spot the moment he learned about her. And that he did everything in his power, to collect her from that safe house, so he could gather all of his new found family around him, since family is important to him. You made him a compassione man, and I love that.

I better stop here. All that I have left to say is that I love this one.

Nicely done! Let us not wait another six months for the next chapter, please. CE

Squee! A new chapter - you rock. I did have to go through and re-read, but this story is so good it was a pleasure. Please keep up the updates!

Wow. Is there more to come or is that the end?

Either way great story.

I know I read this a while ago and it was great to be reminded of the exciting story especially with a new chapter added.

Hope I read more from you soon.

xxkatyxx

Great chapter, Melanie. I love the way their relationships are interwaving. This is one of my favorite stories.

I like the story very much. I like to see the mature and calm relationship between the, oh, actually all, of the major characters. Your style is cool and refreshing. Please, don't kill anyone who matters... I am looking forward to read more. CE