wow...just wow...so yah 10/10

I wonder how Cloud reacts to seeing Hades in KH2.

I have not played Kingdom Hearts, nor watched any of the FF series besides ADVENT CHILDREN, but I did enjoy this story. Poor confused Cloud (what else can you call the apathic-emo?) and the comical Zack (my favorite knave) were a wonderful duo.

The blending of worlds, well done. How you tied in Sora without actually show up to steal the show, nice.

You managed to make a lovely story for a reader who has only a passing knowledge of the characters. I do wish there had been a little more physical descriptions of characters. Still, nicely done.

This is a must read. Absolutely fabulous fan fic, and is now the reason I have an account on the site. Fits perfectly as the story of how Cloud ended up as Hades' stooge,and what happened after. This is the standard we should aspire to when writing a story. I look forward to all future works.

pretty good summary. =) hope you keep up the good work in future stories!

Woot! great ending! ^_^

gah...did tifa..die? =S

Woo-hoo! Finished it~ I had to re-read this as a whole actually, but it was fun. (Not to mention I didn't suffer with cliffies, fufufufufufu) ^^

It's because of this and the RP that I like the character Zack as much as I do now. Great job adding more to his character outside from the sparse scenes we see him in FF7 and AC, oh, and Last Order (I'm sure you loved that one VERY much, m'yes. X3)

I love how the FF7 world intermingled well with the Kingdom Hearts world in your story. I think I've said this before, but it doesn't hurt to say it again because you did an awesome job tying things from both stories together.

I loved that one flashback in Chapter 24 (Part 20, actually, hehe) after Heartless!Zack appeared. Well placed, that was. Your intention, I suppose -- get that extra painful oomph into what followed. ;-; (Though, the flashback did make me laugh for a while. Wo-hoo, comedic relief... ish...)

Also the connection between Zack and Cloud was awesome. So, I kinda teared up with the Epilogue... *cough* I'm growing soft really. But the Epilogue was very touching. He's gone. He's really gone... (okay, he's still in the RP, but ... *sniffs*)

Great story. Loved it. I'm repeating myself. I shall stop. You rock. Yays! ^_^

WOOT! Aeris is here! =)

i hope Aeris comes out soon...X)

good chappy! =)

Oh... Wow... Sniff sob. You always write the most intense, emotional, bittersweet stories!! I always want to cry when I read them! The happy scenes are so terribly sad, and the sad scenes are so terribly beautiful... Let me go blow my nose.

Even though Cloud spent most of this fic being a sulky jerk, you made him very likeable. Especially when he was older and more mature. You did an awesome job with his dark powers and how he never really had any control over them.

I spent most of this story wishing he'd sleep. Or someone would spike his drink and make him sleep.

Zack was cool, too. I didn't always agree with your characterization of him, but you still made him an awesome mentor and friend for Cloud. He was always giving everything to everyone else... The world was a lesser place when he was killed.

Thank you for putting aside your hatred of Aeris when you wrote about her. You did a very nice job and captured her spirit very well. Once or twice she was nasty, but she's like that in the game, too. No one's perfect, and you drove that home with each and every character in here.

You also made me like Kairi. Yay...?

If I went over everything that affected me in this story, this review would be about five pages long! So I'll just say that it was beautifully written, the FF and KH worlds were blended *very* well, and that I still need a Kleenex. I look forward to any side-stories you write on this. Or any updates on Light of the Snow Red Village ^ ^.

Hope you had a good Christmas and New Year's! Ja ne!

wow, such a long chapter..=)

argh! i've always hated hojo!! evil guy gr...and poor cloud...

lol, i guess you put Cloud's past in a pretty good and organized way. =)