Ashley and Manny suck they should just date each other and leave Craig for Ellie. :(

Craig doesn't belong with Ashley, EVERYBODY knows he belongs with Ellie. DUH! CRELLIE FOREVERMORE!

But its still a good story. (:

I never liked how Manny caught all the crap when her and Craig were found out.


Kia

Aw...!

They're good fro each other.

Kia

Glad I found this always liked Sean and Ellie!!

Kia

whao!! I didn't even realize the big ol' name switch was in this chapter!! whoa...

I loved everything Alex said, you really got her character into it, and everyone at the lunch table,too...

bahaha, this line made me laugh: “or on your lap…dude, she’s still all about your cock, man.”
hahaha

lovely chapter.

'I'm Not Okay' iS a FUCKING AWESOME SONG!! haven't listened to it in ages..

I can't believe I'm almost done with this story!! whoa

whoa, interesting cutting/sex connection. I thought that was really cool.

haha, nice boy/ice cream theory!

hehe, the mark/ashely stuff was cute!

lovely chapter!

At first I don't think I was too keene on the story actually following an actual episode - I guess because I was use to the story being so AU, or something...

I love how Tracker took care of Ellie. If it wouldn't be so totally out there, I'd make them a pairing and write about them on my own! haha

Finally!! a song by a band I know!! Emery is cool!!

just a side question, what's butterfly stitching?

lovely chapter!! Sean's gift to Ellie was the sweetest thing ever!

Sean and Ellie are so cute!!

I like Jules' character, she seems really real, in a way. Is she, like, based off of a real person?

"Ellie just wanted to take him home and put him to bed, in a non-sexual way of course." bahaha. that made me laugh.

"refridgerator quality" - that's cute.
I also liked the whole "what goes up most come down" thing.

I'm not sure if I've mentioned it before, but I really like all of the Jay calling Ellie a poser and an 'Avril' and stuff. It just makes it...I don't know...more realistic?

lovely chapter!!

yay! they finally kiss!!

I like how you put a bunch of memories and flashbacks in the story. it gives it a certain...I don't know, but I like it!!

sorry I'm not leaving a signed review, for some reason I can't long in...