Give it a break, 'Seriously Wrong'. 'Lia-and-Randir', I didn't think this was bad at all, regardless of what others have said about it. You're a good writer and it's a shame you stopped working on this one, I would have liked to have heard more :) I know there are purists out there who don't like deviation, but I think we can all appreciate fanfic regardless of whether it follows the events of the novels strictly or not. And we can also have a lot more consideration for the people writing it!! Some of the other reviews are just plain nasty, but I have the utmost respect for you for putting up with those people, Lia-and-Randir!! It was an interesting idea and the 2 chapters written are really well done!! :)

LOOK, "Are You Kidding", this story is a PARODY.
From Webster's Dictionary-
pa-ro-dy - n. a farcical imitation of a literary or musical work or style.
THAT MEANS IT'S SKEWED. And Rand MEANS to butcher the story.

"Inescapable doom" huh, people I am inescabale doom. Get a clue this is not good writing, even your one good reviewer doesn't understand what's going on.

WHAT?!?!?!? YOU'RE ASKING ME IF I READ THE BOOKS?
BTW, Lia, someone else.
I HATE YOU. No, not you, Lia.
I'm not butchering the Silmarillion!
*bursts into tears and runs out of the room*
YOU'RE SO HURTFUL! YOU'RE MAKING FUN OF ME BECAUSE I'M A SIMPLETON! I HATE YOU!
Complete and inescapable doom on you.
Hey Lia, that HairballsOuttheWindow guy was... I'll e-mail it 2 ya.

*cough* Hey, Rand, guess what-I'm sick. Reeks, huh? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME THAT YOU'D BEEN UPLOADING? *cough* Ow...yelling hurts...
Put more Lia cameos in. BTW, is Leanna s'posed to be Lia or Haleth or someone else?

Oh lord you can't be serious. Have you read the books, this is so lame and stupid. I won't even go into the format problems the plot is so bad, the language inane and for crying out loud he's going to call himself Turn. I guess you might as well butcher the Silmarillion while your at it.

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*WHY IS LIA IN THE BAR WITH REMY?*
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