this was very lovely. you keep the characters so true to the show and the plot was excellent. i really enjoyed it.

great work! i really wish you'd write another part. i definitely wouldn't mind reading more! :D

So cute! Definitely fits in with the earlier parts of the storyline. I need to go back and watch that stuff again... heh.

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's just so...so...
so...heartwarming and endearing. I am an avid fan of Darien and Serena (it's the only thing that attracted me to the whole Sailor moon series) and this is one of the absoulte BEST! Darien-serena fanfics that I have read. And I've read a lot of them believe you me. I would LOVE! To read the others you have written. I've read "Rain" and love it just as much. Keep 'em commin' 'cause they ROCK! GO YOU!

Very well-written. The plot is original (though I think that I've read this before on ). You are Kris Mercado, right? I hope to see another new BSSM story or addition to one from you in the future. But this is a gem of SM fanfiction among a veritable shmorgasboard (unsure of the spelling there) of crap here on And yes, the dub is funny *insert laugh here*
~Lina

yep the ending paragraphs about love are related to Anne of Avonlea but they're not exactily the same, yours is beautiful too.

WOW!! THAT WUZ GOOD!! very... romantic plots!! HAHAHAH!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~aurora

Great Story! ^_^

hi
i like you 4 years old fic
is good
ja ne

Aw...that was sweet!! Loved how Love can mix with jealousy!

Hey this is great! i lovee the anne of green hables series so that quote hit right on!! This is truly sweet and the emotions are captured beautifully - please do continue!

Wow! That was very very good!
i enjoyed reading it very much!!
i didnt want it to end!
*sobs*
thanks for a great story!!
sam