That was hot... can't wait to see them try to take things to the next level. :D

As for Penelope, she's an interesting character, and I loved the way you had her make an entrance. Can't wait to see where you go with all of this, and hope you post it soon! :)

Rock on, mate!

Shaliza :)

Awesome opening! I'm ecstatic to see you writing another N/F story. Looking forward to seeing where you go with all of this.

Shaliza :)

Wow! This is really good! I've favorited you since I read "Organ of Fire," and I really love all the fanfiction you've got here! I just hope you update this one soon. . . I've always loved Nancy/Frank! _

Cheers, and Thank you for the great story!

nice! I'm glad I found the sequel! I can't wait for more F/N mystery and chemistry! plus..it got a little hot in the beginning of the chapter..:o ha ha. Just update soon please!

xoxo Diamond and Stars

I loved Bay of Peril and Dance of Death is just as promising. I'm hoping that you may be able to finish this story one day because it's hard to find good quality writers like yourself. Anyways just wanted to say that I love your stories.

when are you ever going to finish this story? it seems to be a very good one.

signed,

frnchfrylvr

Loving it already, love nancy and frank, love joe and bess, love fenton and laura, love hannah, love carson, don't really like Penelope, that may change that might not. for me to acctually know you must update. SOON!

Yup, I'd be one crazy person to ask you to update, but why not? So, UPDATE NOW! please? It's a very good fanfic, I would love to see more of it.

Great story. Please continue.

Yeah! A Francy! I LOVE FRANCY'S! Ned's a loser. Frank Nancy FOREVER!

Hi! I know it's been, like, 2 yeares since you last updated but I was wondering if you were thinking about ever picking this one up again? I loved Bay of Peril and love this one too!

Raina

Update! Update! Update! I'm begging you. I love this story and I want it to be continued or I'll be forced to cry.

Really good. I like how finally Carson has a love life it's about time. I wondered where the mystery was going to come into play. I hope Nancy and Penelope have a good relationship.

im asking a big favor can u finish this nancydrew/hardyboys fanfic i super love it

I realize its been a while since your last update, but I'm still hoping you'll find the incentive to finish this. It's such a great beginning with so much potential; the characters are portrayed realistically and the romance is beautifully written. I loved your work in "Bay of Peril" and I know this can be just as good. Would it be hoping against hope to beg for an update?