 Chaos-chick3 2004-04-23 . chapter 7I'm reviewing for all 7 chapters.
That was great! Aw...when you said you had Grawp/Hermione I just had to go read it. This is such a good story though! Your writing really flows nicely and I loved how you developed Ron. He's so sweet, especially the reading up on curses. I was wondering what he was doing when he kept hiding his books. That was good, how you didn't just come out with it. Everybody's so in character, and you portray Hermione's grief very well. It's so true, that you can end up snapping at everyone trying to help when you're upset.
*sob* Why did Grawp have to die? I liked how you civilized him, but why kill him? WHY!? *takes deep breath* Ok, I'm calm. Hmm, killed by werewolves? That'd be an interesting plotbunny if he was bitten. I wonder what happens when giants are bitten by werewolves?
Well, this is an excellent story, just like your others. I love your writing style. |