Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Fallen - Page 1 of 56
Gaaralovessakuraforever
2009-11-23 . chapter 15
i hop you could send the last sene to k?
dragonbaby93
2009-11-05 . chapter 15
This story was really great. It was a little upsetting that Harry never regained all the power that he had. It also would have been nice if his relationship with Severus had gone farther than it did (temporarily of course with him still ending up with Voldemort, and all parties still living). The ending seemed slightly abrupt, I would have liked to see some more interaction between Draco and Hermione, but all in all a great story.
Hope to read more from you in the future.
Davien Lucifer Winters
2009-09-26 . chapter 15
I really liked it! It was pure awsomeness! If I could get a copy of the cut out part that would be nice. My email is
Hocapontas
2009-09-01 . chapter 13
I can't get the address to work so I can't read chapter 13. Any suggestion?
Anne399
2009-08-13 . chapter 15
Loved the story! It was excellent how the relationships developed between all the main characters. The best part, in my opinion, was that Harry stayed as light as possible even till the end - a perfect counter to Voldermort's dark side.
Animegrl421
2009-07-30 . chapter 15
This story is so GOOD! I love your writing style, it's easy to read and it doesn't make me want to bash my head in the wall like most fanfics do! (That's a definite plus!) Keep writing!
jimmy-barnes-13
2009-07-15 . chapter 15
Really great story, well written :)
Giannina
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Lovely poem, you really have talent
Alex Wang
2009-05-11 . chapter 7
(I'll sign in next time)

There are several grammar mistakes and I think a couple of sentences could have be reworded. But the plot- I like. I like the fact that Harry is in Ravenclaw, his last name is not Riddle and that he's not a twisted kid or a mega-genius. He's still kind of sweet and noble in his own way. It was an immense relief for me when I was reading this.

Great job!
Seacilin
2009-04-10 . chapter 15
A teasing story. A tidbit here and a snippet there, well balanced. A nice read all in all.
Leaping Lion
2009-03-31 . chapter 15
Your stories are always brilliant. I was expecting a little more LM/HP or SS/HP than what was, but in the end I love how simple you kept the relationships.
Thank you very much for writing this!!
A Single Fragile Rose
2009-03-29 . chapter 2
NEVERMIND, THE STORY IS COMPLETE! [OPPS] LOL
BUT, NEVERTHELESS, IT'S STILL AN AWESOME STORY! JA NE. =]]
A Single Fragile Rose
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
LOVE IT AND I HOPE YOU KEEP UPDATING, AND DID NOT FORGET ABOUT THIS AMAZING STORY! =]]
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE VOLDEMORT AND HARRY PAIRINGS, THEY'RE NUMERO UNO! LOL
JA NE AND GOOD LUCK! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! =]]
Spoon10488
2009-03-28 . chapter 15
Love your story. I read the NC-17 version. So hot and great plot. Umm I didn't mean for that to rhyme. Oh well, awesome story.
=)
Talenyn01
2009-01-02 . chapter 15
Awesome story! I loved it!

(oh, and what is Inkstain?)
Return to Top