Haha! Love this :D

*le gasp* OMFG. REMUS x SIRIUS LURVE~ 8D

... I found this very amusing.

Read: I FOUND THIS SO EFFING HILARIOUS I COULDN'T BREATHE!

Other than the fact that Sirius is gay in this, I actually liked it. I was going to write the same old "you do know Sirius is in Gryffindor, right?" but then I read your note, so yeah :)

To avoid getting comments like that, maybe you should list this as an A/U (alternate universe) fic, and maybe explain and put a note to the readers BEFORE the story so they know and you don't need to keep getting comments of the same annoying kind :)

Hey, you asked for constructive.. :) Just an opinion.

anyway, good job!

The mental image was too cute for me not to squee at. Poor Remus, torn between your two great terrors. Lovely fic.

(Though I will admit now you've got me rather curious about Sirius being in Slytherin and with a Hufflepuff boyfriend.)

comment: Sirius was in GRIFFYNDOR

I really loved this.

you should make this a twoshot. you cant end it on just this, cause thats not really remus/sirius. it's good, but I think that when you said that romy was tender and smelled of books and tea and remus tasted of earth and bitter lime and that he was hot and agressive - they should have been switched.
I think there being a brother to Remus is a little weird but you should still have it be a twoshot of where they actualy get together.

Sirius was a Grffnydork! And Remus is an only child!

throwing shoes at malfoy? sounds fun!
Anyways, i love this lil story! hehe, poor siri, now reaally confused, well done on this lil fic!

I loved it! ^.^

You do know that Sirius is in Gryffindor, right?

good story!

aw

that was so cute

*runs off to read the sequel*

Oh, god, I love it! I love it! I really do! Thanks for such a cool chapter!

E!! Except for the fact that Siri's in Slytherin, I absolutely LOVE THIS! a. Romulus and Remus!! Heehee! b. R/S slash!! Yay! c. ADORABLE R/S slash!! BIGGER YAY!!

*will stop using exclamation points now*